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Publicity Call.

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Comment from equestrik
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Awe! This is very cute and cleverly presented from the picture with a little dog who knows he better not snatch that egg roll! Fun and entertaining write!

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2020

Comment from Cynthia Adams1
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This is a cute and sweet poem for children.
The artwork is perfect for your story.
I like the way some of the words rhyme.
I especially like the line: "I hope you have one."
I don't have one right now but i want one again.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2020