Walking the Moon Home
A sonnet inspired by lines from As You Like It17 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
SSSSSStunning! So glad I caught up to this--congrats on your prize for this tour de force of imagery--kudos for attribution re walking the moon home--I assumed it was yours--regardless, this is chock full of fresh and elegant imagery. Cheerssssss. LIZ
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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SSSSSStunning! So glad I caught up to this--congrats on your prize for this tour de force of imagery--kudos for attribution re walking the moon home--I assumed it was yours--regardless, this is chock full of fresh and elegant imagery. Cheerssssss. LIZ
Comment Written 10-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much so much for your kind words and for the wonderful stars as well.g
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written sonnet about the wonderful times of togetherness with a loved one on moonlit romantic walks where the couple usually open their hearts to each other.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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A very well-written sonnet about the wonderful times of togetherness with a loved one on moonlit romantic walks where the couple usually open their hearts to each other.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for your lovely review.
Comment from TommyWrites
Beautifully written, smooth, and wonderful rhymes!
Your poem, even without the image you've chosen to go with it, paints a lovely picture. You've captured the feeling of love inside each word, in each rhyme. The last two lines I really like. I feel like it just...sort of sums up the whole poem!
I do have one suggestion...
You might want to consider making the font bigger, it is rather hard to read. :)
Other then that, you have an excellent poem here!
TommyWrites
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Beautifully written, smooth, and wonderful rhymes!
Your poem, even without the image you've chosen to go with it, paints a lovely picture. You've captured the feeling of love inside each word, in each rhyme. The last two lines I really like. I feel like it just...sort of sums up the whole poem!
I do have one suggestion...
You might want to consider making the font bigger, it is rather hard to read. :)
Other then that, you have an excellent poem here!
TommyWrites
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful review. I appreciate your suggestion regarding font size as well.
Comment from AnnieDawn
I was so intrigued with the explanation of your topic as I had never heard it before and it seems like it is an old, well used one. That one seems to have gotten by me somehow. Well written and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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I was so intrigued with the explanation of your topic as I had never heard it before and it seems like it is an old, well used one. That one seems to have gotten by me somehow. Well written and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review and good wishes.
Comment from dragonpoet
This talks of a gentle love where each is a light for the other to help follow their shared path. It is romantic and alludes to eternal love and the blessing and gift love is.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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This talks of a gentle love where each is a light for the other to help follow their shared path. It is romantic and alludes to eternal love and the blessing and gift love is.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for your lovely review and good wishes. I wish you the same.
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Don't mention it, Mary.
Joan
Comment from sammielwf
Ahhhhh sweet poet. You had me at "walk the moon home". The imagery crafted skillfully by your words was truly beautiful. In my minds eye I could see the sweethearts as they strolled and touched and shared the whispered I love you.
Thank you for sharing this delightful moment wih us.
Sammielwf
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Ahhhhh sweet poet. You had me at "walk the moon home". The imagery crafted skillfully by your words was truly beautiful. In my minds eye I could see the sweethearts as they strolled and touched and shared the whispered I love you.
Thank you for sharing this delightful moment wih us.
Sammielwf
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for your lovely review. It warmed my love the expression, ?walk the moon home,? which is a saying from my mother?s teenage years. Thanks, too, for the lovely stars.
Comment from Vanna1
Such lofty wording, it takes me to the moon! You really used your words well here to describe new love. The presentation is good. I didn't notice the moon in the pic right away, so I was like what does this have to do with the piece? Ha. Then I notice the moon...time for glasses!
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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Such lofty wording, it takes me to the moon! You really used your words well here to describe new love. The presentation is good. I didn't notice the moon in the pic right away, so I was like what does this have to do with the piece? Ha. Then I notice the moon...time for glasses!
Comment Written 01-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for your comments. The picture is my creation, too , I?m glad you noticed my moon.
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Wow, a true artist all around!
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Thanks again.☘️
Comment from phill doran
Hello Mary
This is a super piece. Lovely and so very gentle. Not much is written in this style with such skill. You have taken the words and the form, avoided the pitfalls and 'created' something. It could easily have become parody, but, as I say, you're too skilled for that.
The whole atmosphere, your points of reference, and your very selective vocabulary combine to make this a rewarding read.
Great use of feminine endings too!
I wish you well with this piece...lovely work.
cheers
phill
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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Hello Mary
This is a super piece. Lovely and so very gentle. Not much is written in this style with such skill. You have taken the words and the form, avoided the pitfalls and 'created' something. It could easily have become parody, but, as I say, you're too skilled for that.
The whole atmosphere, your points of reference, and your very selective vocabulary combine to make this a rewarding read.
Great use of feminine endings too!
I wish you well with this piece...lovely work.
cheers
phill
Comment Written 01-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much much, Phil. I appreciate your thoughtfulness in responding so fully. Thanks as well for the lovely stars.
Comment from amada
This poem is like a fresh edit of an old and often narrated love poem. I like your introduction related to music and a song. Romance, love, and songs always go together. Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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This poem is like a fresh edit of an old and often narrated love poem. I like your introduction related to music and a song. Romance, love, and songs always go together. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your kind words.
Comment from Sally Law
I love this sweet romantic poem. I remember that phrase, but you have brought it back to life once again. A lovely offering for the contest, dear Mary.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for your entry,
Sal XOs....xo...
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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I love this sweet romantic poem. I remember that phrase, but you have brought it back to life once again. A lovely offering for the contest, dear Mary.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for your entry,
Sal XOs....xo...
Comment Written 01-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much, Sally. I?m pleased that you enjoyed the poem.
