The Woman
Unmasked story contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
Haha... I love it when evil stuff gets up amongst the winners... and up people's noses. You do like to embrace the macabre, don't you, and you do it so well. As an adopted person myself, I am forever grateful that I ended up with good parents and didn't have to murder them.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Haha... I love it when evil stuff gets up amongst the winners... and up people's noses. You do like to embrace the macabre, don't you, and you do it so well. As an adopted person myself, I am forever grateful that I ended up with good parents and didn't have to murder them.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Yeah, that's a good thing, all right. Haha. Thank you for the great review and stars, Lisa. Plus, sorry for not getting off my butt and being a good member. I haven't put a sixer on your piece about the art in the corner yet. That was flat out hilarious.
Yep, this time I didn't go down the silly trail for this one and won a whole 3 dollars. Lol. I'm glad you liked this dark piece, L. Have a great day. It's raining here in Florida. So much for fun in the sun today. Catch you next time, Lisa.
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Ron
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a sketchy beginning sentence but you carried the tone on well, continuing the setting, character study, and plot. The best part was the reveal, mask down. We found out who they really were. Clever.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
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This is a sketchy beginning sentence but you carried the tone on well, continuing the setting, character study, and plot. The best part was the reveal, mask down. We found out who they really were. Clever.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Liz. Yeah, we had to start the beginning with this sentence. The contest required it. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this dark little piece. Have a great weekend.
Comment from equestrik
Wow! This is well contructred and the punch at the end is powerful, and tragic, and sad. I think it is a clever write for the un-masked contest and should do well as it is well written.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Wow! This is well contructred and the punch at the end is powerful, and tragic, and sad. I think it is a clever write for the un-masked contest and should do well as it is well written.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Equestrik. I'm glad you liked this dark piece.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello mystery writer, a wonderful Wednesday to you. Thank you for sharing that story with us, I think this is one of the best "unmasked" entries I have read. Great job! I totally didn't see that ending coming. WOW! Glad I didn't enter this contest I wouldn't have stood a chance. LOL
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Hello mystery writer, a wonderful Wednesday to you. Thank you for sharing that story with us, I think this is one of the best "unmasked" entries I have read. Great job! I totally didn't see that ending coming. WOW! Glad I didn't enter this contest I wouldn't have stood a chance. LOL
Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the great review, 13. I really don't foresee this going anywhere. If it doesn't end in rainbows and eternal love it's pretty well dead in the water. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this dark piece. Have yourself a great day.
