The Corona saga
Viewing comments for Chapter 63 "Holy masko-mony"to keep my sanity in time of pandemic
12 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I did have a laugh, You made me smile again. You have humor that won't stop. It is strange how a mind will think of things to say when writing. But I think you have no problem with the flow of words.
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I did have a laugh, You made me smile again. You have humor that won't stop. It is strange how a mind will think of things to say when writing. But I think you have no problem with the flow of words.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
Comment from palmart
Totally creative poem!! The idea of translating into a marriage celebration what Corona - Virus has taught us lately is definitively plausible. Considering the details like the (separated) isolation or the obstacles to kiss each other are simply hilarious!! Great choice of picture as well.
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Totally creative poem!! The idea of translating into a marriage celebration what Corona - Virus has taught us lately is definitively plausible. Considering the details like the (separated) isolation or the obstacles to kiss each other are simply hilarious!! Great choice of picture as well.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
Comment from Bill Schott
Funny piece.
Self-isolation? Awesome. This will be our honeymoon!
- Not quite. Each of you will self-isolate in a different place. You may meet the bride after fourteen days. Happy marriage!
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Funny piece.
Self-isolation? Awesome. This will be our honeymoon!
- Not quite. Each of you will self-isolate in a different place. You may meet the bride after fourteen days. Happy marriage!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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I hope not:) Happy marriage:)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written pun filled story and the new way to get married is not a very satisfying way for the bride or the groom. A very strange way to become a married couple.
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Handel(handle) with care,
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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A very well-written pun filled story and the new way to get married is not a very satisfying way for the bride or the groom. A very strange way to become a married couple.
Typo
Handel(handle) with care,
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thank you:)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Okay, now that is a complete nightmare and disaster and definitely a comedy-show/sit-com just waiting to happen!! ;) A fun offering for this contest - thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Okay, now that is a complete nightmare and disaster and definitely a comedy-show/sit-com just waiting to happen!! ;) A fun offering for this contest - thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Thank you:) jokes aside:) vote for me:) ups, against side policy, it wasn't me, it was Coronella ,I swear:)
Comment from Beck Fenton
Darn! This story is coming perilously close to reality! I can imagine a few couples needing to be separated to cool down their fever for each other!
And you managed to get it the required puns. Well done!
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Darn! This story is coming perilously close to reality! I can imagine a few couples needing to be separated to cool down their fever for each other!
And you managed to get it the required puns. Well done!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Thank you:)
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a great entry for the Pun-Filled Short Story writing prompt. I was glued to it from the beginning to the end. I hope this story does well in the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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This is a great entry for the Pun-Filled Short Story writing prompt. I was glued to it from the beginning to the end. I hope this story does well in the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much Rebecca for this heart lifting review:)
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You're very welcome!
Comment from papa55mike
The problem is, that story is not far from happening. I can't think of any more puns to put in there. What a wonderfully written story.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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The problem is, that story is not far from happening. I can't think of any more puns to put in there. What a wonderfully written story.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 05-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much Mike, your review gives me hope that I am on the right track with this story.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha, what a fun pun story, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. Your dialogue read naturally. I could feel the husband becoming exasperated with the questions. What an ending to this marriage--self isolation in separate areas.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Haha, what a fun pun story, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. Your dialogue read naturally. I could feel the husband becoming exasperated with the questions. What an ending to this marriage--self isolation in separate areas.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much, Jan:)
Comment from equestrik
This is a clever write for the pun-filled story contest. Nicely done! It is a good write for the times we are in for sure and am glad that things are not quite this bad! I did enjoy the chuckle!
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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This is a clever write for the pun-filled story contest. Nicely done! It is a good write for the times we are in for sure and am glad that things are not quite this bad! I did enjoy the chuckle!
Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my silly story:)
