Prayers for Fanstory Family
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "For Now He Rests"Prose and Poem Prayers for Fanstorians
8 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you, Dawn, for sharing in the grieving with Yvonne with your poem for her. Loved your Scripture references and the song. I hope she will see this soon.
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Thank you, Dawn, for sharing in the grieving with Yvonne with your poem for her. Loved your Scripture references and the song. I hope she will see this soon.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2020
Comment from Joan E.
The loss of one's child has to be the most tragic ever experienced. Thank you for sharing your condolences to Yvonne with these comforting, rhymed words and picture. Sighs- Joan
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The loss of one's child has to be the most tragic ever experienced. Thank you for sharing your condolences to Yvonne with these comforting, rhymed words and picture. Sighs- Joan
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
Comment from Gloria ....
Dawn this is most tender and kind of you. I can't imagine the grief of losing a child, a grief I know you have also felt, and your poem to Yvonne will provide must solace to her during this most difficult time, I am sure.
Beautiful and most thoughtful poem and presentation.
Gloria
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Dawn this is most tender and kind of you. I can't imagine the grief of losing a child, a grief I know you have also felt, and your poem to Yvonne will provide must solace to her during this most difficult time, I am sure.
Beautiful and most thoughtful poem and presentation.
Gloria
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
Comment from Ulla
Yes, it must be one of the most difficult things to endure as a mother and as a parent. I can't even imagine the grief. Thanks for sharing such a lovely poem. I know Yvonne will appreciate it. Ulla:)))
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Yes, it must be one of the most difficult things to endure as a mother and as a parent. I can't even imagine the grief. Thanks for sharing such a lovely poem. I know Yvonne will appreciate it. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was beautiful, Dawn. I do so hope she is alright. Nothing could be as heartbreaking as losing a child. Your words in this poem will be sure to bring Yvonne some comfort. Warm hugs, my friend. Sandra xx
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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That was beautiful, Dawn. I do so hope she is alright. Nothing could be as heartbreaking as losing a child. Your words in this poem will be sure to bring Yvonne some comfort. Warm hugs, my friend. Sandra xx
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Sandta.
Comment from Sugarray77
Dawn, this is precious! I know it will be a comfort and solace to Yvonne as she reads your verse. Well done on content, form and the attached video. :)
Melissa
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Dawn, this is precious! I know it will be a comfort and solace to Yvonne as she reads your verse. Well done on content, form and the attached video. :)
Melissa
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is a personal poem and that's clear. The second line didn't seem to fit (about the views) but since it's personal it likely means something to the target. Very well written. It was warm and touching.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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This is a personal poem and that's clear. The second line didn't seem to fit (about the views) but since it's personal it likely means something to the target. Very well written. It was warm and touching.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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Thank you. You're right, it doesn't get much more personal than two women with shared beliefs who have both lost a child.
Comment from robyn corum
Dawn,
How beautiful! And obviously, condolences ARE NOT all you have to offer. You've also presented Yvonne with a lovely, lovely message of hope and comfort. In the body of a perfectly formed poem. *smile*
I think it's perfect. Thanks!
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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Dawn,
How beautiful! And obviously, condolences ARE NOT all you have to offer. You've also presented Yvonne with a lovely, lovely message of hope and comfort. In the body of a perfectly formed poem. *smile*
I think it's perfect. Thanks!
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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You are too kind, dear Robyn. I am in tears with this beautiful review. Thank you.
