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Comment from John bailey
Doctor Ricky this is a beautiful poem, everything is so smooth like oil on a rock, even though there is still some pain, I love where you are going,keep writing I'll keep reading.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Doctor Ricky this is a beautiful poem, everything is so smooth like oil on a rock, even though there is still some pain, I love where you are going,keep writing I'll keep reading.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Again not much appreciate John and I will present a new book today.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The Mermaid here that chanced her hand on land only to find the sea is the only place she really belongs, a fine write Ricky, we are sometimes fishes out of water, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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The Mermaid here that chanced her hand on land only to find the sea is the only place she really belongs, a fine write Ricky, we are sometimes fishes out of water, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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Thanks for this fine review Dolly and have a blessed week.
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a mournful verse of 'magnificat' whatever she may be... mermaid, yes? A bit unclear what has happened to her.... switching of the see/sea was a little confusing... But great presentation! ;) Thanx for sharing!
to be or to be --> [did you mean...?] to be or not to be
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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Such a mournful verse of 'magnificat' whatever she may be... mermaid, yes? A bit unclear what has happened to her.... switching of the see/sea was a little confusing... But great presentation! ;) Thanx for sharing!
to be or to be --> [did you mean...?] to be or not to be
Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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Thanks Yvette and I caught that little glimpse and corrected it!
Ricky