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Renga Multi-Author Book

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Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7

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Comment from June Sargent
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I like this addition to the book, continuing the apple blossoms and orchard theme. Sun kisses on bronze skin - great imagery. Well done. I hope someone will do a nice follow up.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
    Hello, june,

    Thank you very much for your review and kind words. Thank you for the six stars!

    Hugs, Gypsy
Comment from Joan E.
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Thank you for your addition of this 7-7 couplet to June's 5-7-5 for this Renga collaborative poem. Your picture reinforced the picture and your final line took it a step further. Well done- Joan

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
    Thank you very much, Joan :)
Comment from Gloria ....
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You are getting lots chapters in your renga book here. Your contribution today is lovely and works well in concert with June's contribution.

Always great to see where your book goes, and many thanks for sharing.

Gloria

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
    Thank you very much, Gloria.

    Peace,

    Gypsy
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Gypsy your 7/7 couplet following June's 5/7/5 - chapter 76
chapter in the book Renga Multi-Author Book
Sun Kisses the wet sweat on brown skin.
Gert

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
    Thank you very much, my friend. I really appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.

    Peace,

    Gypsy
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Oh, I do love the complete visual you are able to create with only those two lines, Gypsy -- almost a calming call to work as the sun rises and the smell of grapes and dust permeate the air! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
    Thank you very much, Yvette. I do appreciate that you took the time to review my poem. You are very kind.

    Hugs,
    Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
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I like how you carried on June's orchard theme and then added your own human element. Even in the early morning, the hard-working farmer already has "salty" from sweat skin. Nicely done!

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
    Thank you very much, Helen. I do appreciate that you took the time to review my poem. You are very kind.

    Hugs,
    Gypsy