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The Infomercial

Inventive Geniuses contest entry

24 total reviews 
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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First of all--LOL! This is hilarious--inventive and--well, waaaay out there,
just as it should be. You have used an entertaining, well varied list of examples, complete with some very direct details!

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
    Thank you for the great review, Janice. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece. I hope you have a wonderful weekend.

    =]

    Ron
Comment from pome lover
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Ron, where in the world did you find that picture?!! I bet you saw it first, then made up your poem, to go with it, which, I have to say, is rather, um, well, anyway, I bet you win with it.
Unbelievable! personal, moveable, wearable porta-potties.
Ah, well. original. I'll give you that.
Katharine - pome lover

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
    Hey, Katharine, hello. I actually created this picture myself. The original picture was just the couple dancing and I manipulated five other pictures to make it look like this. I usually play with my art program to match the ideas I come up with. I don't think I've ever seen a picture like this on the internet. lol Thank you for the great review and generous stars. I'm glad you liked this twisted piece. Have yourself a wonderful weekend.

    =]

    Ron
Comment from Suzanna Ray
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Dear Dragon, I will give you 9 stars for creating your illustration. I think it was necessary for me, to envision how your invention could possibly work.
As it is, you have supplied us All, with both the poem and the device. This contest is going to be fun fun fun!

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
    Thank you for the great review, Suzanna. I actually like playing with my art program nearly as much as writing. This is a combination of 6 different pictures stretched, bent, duplicated, resized and many other little tweaks added in. I'm glad you noticed the work that went into it. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked my silly little offering. I hope you have yourself a wonderful weekend.

    =]

    Ron
Comment from Tina Crute
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Winner, winner, chicken dinner! I wish I had a six to give this! What I liked about this: the humor all the way through; your created picture tells the reader..."get ready to laugh!"; the plain format makes your words get all the attention; the jingle and the one-liner about collection bags...I can just hear this on the tv. What a treat this was! Funny poems I like to read to my hubby. He will love this:)
Tina

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
    Thank you for the fantastic review and big six offer, Tina. Yes, I love writing silly stuff on here. I do it often. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars and glad to see you jumped on as a fan. I hope hubby gets a chuckle out of this ridiculous piece too. Have yourself a great weekend and thank you again.

    =]

    Ron
Comment from dragonpoet
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This sounds like a product for a very lazy person. I would think the smell of it would keep people away. But there are always those who would fall for anything.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healhy.
Joan

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
    Yes, it'd be one smelly product, that's for sure. Lol. Thank you for the great review and good luck wishes, Joan.

    Ron
reply by dragonpoet on 03-Oct-2020
    My pleasure, Ron.
    Joan
Comment from robyn corum
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DS,

Thanks for the smiles!! This was so much fun! I am so impressed with your photo-editing skills, too. Did you also create the ZnS?

I think this is an awesome entry for the contest. Thanks and good luck!

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
    Thank you for the great review and for throwing the contest, Robyn. I had fun with it. I'm surprised more people haven't jumped in yet. I love using art program nearly as much as writing. There's actually 5 different pictures in here. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silliness.

    Ron
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Ha ha ha, this is hilarious and your informercial is genius! Not sure how many people will buy one of this, but I know my Grandma would be first in the queue and my youngest grandchild too! I suppose keeping one in the boot of the car would not go amiss, a fun write, I am still laughing, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much for the great review and generous stars, Dolly. Yes, I doubt I'd make millions off of it. Lol. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. Thank you again.

    Ron
Comment from Earl Corp
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But if you act right now, we'll send you two for the price of one. But wait, that's not all if you order in the next 30 minutes we'll throw in a third Zip-n-Squat absolutely free all you pay is shipping and handling. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
    Thank you for the great review, Earl. Yeah, I gave some thought to putting something in there like that but I figured it was already a bit lengthy. I appreciate the generous stars and good luck, friend. Have a great weekend.

    Ron
Comment from papa55mike
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My friend, you better patent that thing! Somebody will steal that idea. There's a huge market stuff like that in Japan. What a wonderfully written and funny poem.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
    Thank you for the great review and big sixer, Mike. Yeah, Japan has some crazy ideas running around over there. Lol. I really appreciate the generous rating and good luck wishes, friend. I'm glad you liked this ridiculous piece. Have yourself a fantastic weekend and thank you again.

    Ron
Comment from LyndaS
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Again, I'm thinking your mind is like some demented candy store. Who thinks like this?? Lol

Quite the post you have here. Great meter and rhyme, outside the box and hilarious. Your art work is delightful and compliments this entry beautifully. It's so cool that you have this graphic, artistic talent that enables you to craft exactly what you want for your off-the-wall posts.

Zip-n-Squat... LMFAO!!!! Well done, dude!

Lynda

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
    Hahaha. Yes, I love my demented candy store. Lol. Thank you so much for the giant sixer, Lynda. I think I told you this before but if not, I love playing with my art program. Almost as much as coming up these ridiculous poems I write. Lol. I'm glad you liked this silliness, L. Thank you again.

    =]

    Ron