The Infomercial
Inventive Geniuses contest entry24 total reviews
Comment from lightink
Oh, the Genius! So lovely that a poor therapist wouldn't need to excuse oneself amidst the patients emotional self-confession! Or a neurosurgeon in the middle of a 10 hour surgery! So freaking perfect! Not to mention the usefulness on the Senate Floor! You must be a millionaire by now, but I truly hope you'll still keep in touch with your less inventive poetry friends! ;). Oh, will you sell custom made pants with it - for a no-zip--just-squat experience?
You masterfully mimicked the cheerful tone of commercials, down to the payment options! I enjoyed the fun little scenarios. As a mom, I can attest that having to haul your tot in from the yard, is quite an inconvenience - and yes, the theatre situation is a big deal - especially in Hungary, where leaving the movie is very much frowned upon (unlike here in the US)! The wedding ceremony and job interview is the funniest, craziest of all! LOL! I love how your mind works!
Thank you for sharing the fun and congrats on winning. Well deserved!
(Also, the pics are priceless!)
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Oh, the Genius! So lovely that a poor therapist wouldn't need to excuse oneself amidst the patients emotional self-confession! Or a neurosurgeon in the middle of a 10 hour surgery! So freaking perfect! Not to mention the usefulness on the Senate Floor! You must be a millionaire by now, but I truly hope you'll still keep in touch with your less inventive poetry friends! ;). Oh, will you sell custom made pants with it - for a no-zip--just-squat experience?
You masterfully mimicked the cheerful tone of commercials, down to the payment options! I enjoyed the fun little scenarios. As a mom, I can attest that having to haul your tot in from the yard, is quite an inconvenience - and yes, the theatre situation is a big deal - especially in Hungary, where leaving the movie is very much frowned upon (unlike here in the US)! The wedding ceremony and job interview is the funniest, craziest of all! LOL! I love how your mind works!
Thank you for sharing the fun and congrats on winning. Well deserved!
(Also, the pics are priceless!)
Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Hey, Jyoti, hello. First off, let me say, HAHAHAHA!! In surgery or public speaking didn't even cross my mind. That would have been hilarious in here. A surgeon in the middle of an operation. HAHAHA. That's awesome. I wish I would have thought of that.
Thank you so much for the fantastic review, J. I had to save the wedding for last because I thought that was the funniest part Lol. The pic is actually made up of like six different pictures, all manipulated to fit and go together. I love my art program nearly as much as writing.
I dearly appreciate the generous stars and congrats, Jyoti. I'm glad you liked this silliness. I hope you have a wonderful weekend.
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Ron
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is very funny. It's too bad this couldn't be presented to Shark Tank. There's a weird trend and it is descending to teens. It is a subculture of wearing diapers. This is much better. I don't know why anyone would want to wear a diaper unnecessarily. That time will come soon enough. Maybe this idea is not so far fetched...lol
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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This is very funny. It's too bad this couldn't be presented to Shark Tank. There's a weird trend and it is descending to teens. It is a subculture of wearing diapers. This is much better. I don't know why anyone would want to wear a diaper unnecessarily. That time will come soon enough. Maybe this idea is not so far fetched...lol
Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Liz. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece. Yeah, I'm not looking forward to the diapers either. lol Have a great day.
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Ron
Comment from LisaMay
You have certainly chosen a rather gross topic but it is very skillfully delivered. You are kicking butt in the voting!! Luckily there is toilet paper handy to wipe your foot,.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
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You have certainly chosen a rather gross topic but it is very skillfully delivered. You are kicking butt in the voting!! Luckily there is toilet paper handy to wipe your foot,.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
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Hahaha. Yep, gotta have that handy. Thank you for the great review, Lisa.
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Comment from palmart
Funny poem and funny article too! Let me say that is fully creative and looks like a present product as it has not only a jingle but a real picture as well, showing the advantages of using Zip-n-Squat.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
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Funny poem and funny article too! Let me say that is fully creative and looks like a present product as it has not only a jingle but a real picture as well, showing the advantages of using Zip-n-Squat.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the great review and stars, palmart. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
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You´re welcome, DragonSkulls! I guess it is not so silly as you may win! We consider (me included) our participation is minor, but from other`s point of view, things look somewhat different.
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Yes, every little bit helps. That's for sure. Thak you again.
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Ron
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You´re very welcome, Ron!!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Inventive Geniuses contest entry
The Infomercial
by DragonSkulls
Hello, Ron,
LoL this is really funny and super gross. I like the rhyme and meter...it has a great rhythm. The presentation is nice too. Yours is the best one in the voting booth.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Inventive Geniuses contest entry
The Infomercial
by DragonSkulls
Hello, Ron,
LoL this is really funny and super gross. I like the rhyme and meter...it has a great rhythm. The presentation is nice too. Yours is the best one in the voting booth.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Gypsy. I dearly appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness.
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Ron
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I voted for you :)
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Thank you, G.
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
OH MY GOODNESS GRACIOUS... only you, Ron!! ;) :) This is hilarious and so perfect for the 'male humor' in, perhaps, that bathroom book we have in the bathroom for 'reading'... ;) :) Love it, sir -- thanx for sharing and best of luck with Zip-n-Squat! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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OH MY GOODNESS GRACIOUS... only you, Ron!! ;) :) This is hilarious and so perfect for the 'male humor' in, perhaps, that bathroom book we have in the bathroom for 'reading'... ;) :) Love it, sir -- thanx for sharing and best of luck with Zip-n-Squat! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 04-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Lol. I love my funny bathroom books. They give me much inspiration. Haha. I was actually driving at my job when I came up with this ridiculous idea. Then I had to play in my art program to get the perfect picture. Lol. Thank you for the awesome review and stars, Yvette. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have yourself a great night.
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Ron
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Inventive Geniuses! contest.
This fun verse is well rhymed and describes what might be the best invention ever!
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Inventive Geniuses! contest.
This fun verse is well rhymed and describes what might be the best invention ever!
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 04-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the great review and gracious stars, Sharon. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Mimi Linny
ROLLING ON THE FLOOR!!!! This is just hysterical and created with such imagination... Rhyme and rhythm of each verse is spot on and the content... well, just too funny! One little note... and its just my opinion... your jingle is slightly off in beat (at least it seems so when I read) and I would maybe suggest tweaking the words slightly to make the rhythm a little smoother (i.e.)
You won't have to worry
if you're home or not.
Anytime you need to go...
Just use your Zip-n-Squat!
BEST LINE: "Collection bags sold separately!" Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha!
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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ROLLING ON THE FLOOR!!!! This is just hysterical and created with such imagination... Rhyme and rhythm of each verse is spot on and the content... well, just too funny! One little note... and its just my opinion... your jingle is slightly off in beat (at least it seems so when I read) and I would maybe suggest tweaking the words slightly to make the rhythm a little smoother (i.e.)
You won't have to worry
if you're home or not.
Anytime you need to go...
Just use your Zip-n-Squat!
BEST LINE: "Collection bags sold separately!" Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha!
Comment Written 03-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Mimi. Yeah, it's hard to actually get the little jingle I have in my head to come across in print the same way for people to understand. But it sounds good in my head. Haha I dearly appreciate the gracious stars, Mimi. I'm glad you had a chuckle at my silly offering. I hope you have a wonderful rest of your weekend.
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Ron
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You, too! It's a beautiful fall day here... Hope it is where you live, too!
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Nope, it's raining down here in Tampa FL. What can you do? Lol.
Comment from Bill Schott
This humorous poem, The Infomercial, and your terrific image, are note-worthy and tremendously funny. The lack of a six or even seven irks me because this is so very well done. Owe you a six.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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This humorous poem, The Infomercial, and your terrific image, are note-worthy and tremendously funny. The lack of a six or even seven irks me because this is so very well done. Owe you a six.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Hey, Bill, hi. Thank you for the great review and the big six offer, my friend. Yes, I think they should let us have a couple more to give out for the week. Lol. I'm glad you liked this silliness, Bill. Thank you again. Have a great rest of your weekend.
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Ron
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
This is a silly poem I must confess. yet you captured my attention form the first word to the last
At first I wasn't going to read any more I'm glade I did
I learned more.(smile)
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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This is a silly poem I must confess. yet you captured my attention form the first word to the last
At first I wasn't going to read any more I'm glade I did
I learned more.(smile)
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 03-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Cookie. I'm glad it held your attention all the way through this silly piece. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this ridiculous entry. I hope you have a great weekend.
Ron
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Your very welcome its the silliest poem I read so far. you have a blessed and fun weekend,
Cookie
