Good Grief
Neighbors lend a hand when Melissa goes into labor.9 total reviews
Comment from roof35
This is an outstanding entry for the Pregnancy Contest. Good Grief but I enjoyed it. I think you have one little typo you might want to fix: Wind whistled as it "two" came in. Probably should be it "too" came in. This is wonderful. Nicely done. I am glad I had a six left.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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This is an outstanding entry for the Pregnancy Contest. Good Grief but I enjoyed it. I think you have one little typo you might want to fix: Wind whistled as it "two" came in. Probably should be it "too" came in. This is wonderful. Nicely done. I am glad I had a six left.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for your support and the six stars. I'll rush in and fix that.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
At first I thought the setting might be Alaska. This would be surrealistic to most but probably not in Alaska. The fact that you were inspired by friends in a blizzard state gives it more detailed reality. Your account has excellent follow through foryour characters. We felt like we were right there.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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At first I thought the setting might be Alaska. This would be surrealistic to most but probably not in Alaska. The fact that you were inspired by friends in a blizzard state gives it more detailed reality. Your account has excellent follow through foryour characters. We felt like we were right there.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Thank you. The story is in the details.
Comment from royowen
Because we've never experienced snow where we live. Although we were in New York when a snowstorm dumped 16 inches of snow on boxing day. It would be difficult when a emergency came along. Beautifully written! I enjoyed this immensely. Great scribing blessings and good luck, Roy
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Because we've never experienced snow where we live. Although we were in New York when a snowstorm dumped 16 inches of snow on boxing day. It would be difficult when a emergency came along. Beautifully written! I enjoyed this immensely. Great scribing blessings and good luck, Roy
Comment Written 03-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much.
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Most welcome
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Pregnancy contest.
This short story is clear and well told.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Pregnancy contest.
This short story is clear and well told.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 02-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
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Thank you kindly.
Comment from eliz100
This is a great story. It kept me interested all the way to the end. I am a mid atlanticer and a midwestener. I guess I am making up words. I cannot imagine my house covered with snow. You have a wonderful imagination.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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This is a great story. It kept me interested all the way to the end. I am a mid atlanticer and a midwestener. I guess I am making up words. I cannot imagine my house covered with snow. You have a wonderful imagination.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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Thank you. Like I said, there is some truth in there. :)
Comment from Ben B.
Such a well orchestrated commotion! This is actually pretty accurate case scenario in a situation of a pregnancy. I'm not sure but I think IV fluids is something you give after the delivery.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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Such a well orchestrated commotion! This is actually pretty accurate case scenario in a situation of a pregnancy. I'm not sure but I think IV fluids is something you give after the delivery.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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Thank you for reviewing. I based the IV part on my own experience when I was transferred between hospitals. The paramedics were required to insert an IV before loading me in. My transfer was by ambulance, but I figured there were similar rules for helicopters.
Comment from Earl Corp
That's a pretty good story it had excitement, drama, and a happy ending. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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That's a pretty good story it had excitement, drama, and a happy ending. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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Thank you for reading it. You stay safe as well.
Comment from equestrik
This is a well written and very believable story, it could b lengthened to make a hallmark movie! What an adventure for a new mother and her baby's entry into the world.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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This is a well written and very believable story, it could b lengthened to make a hallmark movie! What an adventure for a new mother and her baby's entry into the world.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Thank you for reading.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Catch up in a dreadful situation with no way out, everything turned out with a happily-ever-after ending to make all your readers smile. Great job! And, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Catch up in a dreadful situation with no way out, everything turned out with a happily-ever-after ending to make all your readers smile. Great job! And, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Thank you for reading.