Did We Have Fall?
Look quick before it's gone6 total reviews
Comment from wishawave
These daily seasonal seasons are so energetic and vivid, yet it still carry a exquisite taste. The story of daily life unfolds like many small beautiful pictures. I can relate to them easily. I enjoy the colourful autumn and also your poem.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
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These daily seasonal seasons are so energetic and vivid, yet it still carry a exquisite taste. The story of daily life unfolds like many small beautiful pictures. I can relate to them easily. I enjoy the colourful autumn and also your poem.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
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thank you.
Katharine - pome lover
Comment from writer723
I really enjoyed your story about your love of Fall weather. Your descriptions of the colors and temps just drew me in. I could visualize the leaves surrounding the pomegranates that you mentioned. I got a chuckle out of imagining Summer bullying its way back in, as you said. Very nice details!
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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I really enjoyed your story about your love of Fall weather. Your descriptions of the colors and temps just drew me in. I could visualize the leaves surrounding the pomegranates that you mentioned. I got a chuckle out of imagining Summer bullying its way back in, as you said. Very nice details!
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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thank you so much for your comments and for the lovely 6!!
I really appreciate it.
I am originally from Augusta, so we are fellow Georgians!
Thanks again.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Well, Fall hasn't come here although the calendar says it has. We had 104* yesterday. I enjoyed reading your contest entry, Mystery Author. You did a great job expressing your thoughts/feelings about why you like Fall. I liked the line about the plants saying 'thank you.' We will still have hot afternoons in October. Fall is great. I agree with your descriptions.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Well, Fall hasn't come here although the calendar says it has. We had 104* yesterday. I enjoyed reading your contest entry, Mystery Author. You did a great job expressing your thoughts/feelings about why you like Fall. I liked the line about the plants saying 'thank you.' We will still have hot afternoons in October. Fall is great. I agree with your descriptions.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Jan, just looked at your bio to see where you were, and though I don't know where in TX, it sounds like you might be a tad south of me since you're hotter. Also, I read your thanks for those praying for your brother. I don't know what that's about, but please accept my hope that if possible, things improve for him.
Thanks for reading my entry and for your comments and good wishes! (wish I could sign my name!)
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Thank you. Prayers much appreciated. (((HUGS)))
Comment from oliver818
I really enjoyed this poem because of the descriptions. I have never been to New England but it seems to be a beautiful place and the imagery you used made it feel
Alive. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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I really enjoyed this poem because of the descriptions. I have never been to New England but it seems to be a beautiful place and the imagery you used made it feel
Alive. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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thanks, Oliver. If a Texas gal can make New England seem more real, that's quite a compliment. muchas gracias! :)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love your story it's such a wonderful and dreamy situation where all the seasons live in harmony and they don't compete for the first place. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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I love your story it's such a wonderful and dreamy situation where all the seasons live in harmony and they don't compete for the first place. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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thank you so much!
Comment from djsaxon
I love this. Your wonderful description of Fall (we simply call it Autumn in Australia), and your response to the way it manifests is heartwarming. Terrific humour throughout. Great use of the quill - well done.
"Sometimes out(r) winters get cold..." A typo I think. Thank you for sharing. Cheers - DJ
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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I love this. Your wonderful description of Fall (we simply call it Autumn in Australia), and your response to the way it manifests is heartwarming. Terrific humour throughout. Great use of the quill - well done.
"Sometimes out(r) winters get cold..." A typo I think. Thank you for sharing. Cheers - DJ
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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DJ, thought you had dropped your membership. great to hear from you. Thanks for your kind words and typo catch!
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I did have something of a Fanstory sabbatical then renewed earlier this year. Good top be back
