A Family Picnic
150 words, with 'fire, devil, scream, heart, love'.17 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-hundred-word flash fiction story, A Family Picnic, has the required word count and necessary words, and creates a fun scene for a family enjoying a much needed day out.
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This one-hundred-word flash fiction story, A Family Picnic, has the required word count and necessary words, and creates a fun scene for a family enjoying a much needed day out.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
Comment from angel123
Your 100 word story is intertaining with a fun ending. I enjoyed reading it and congratuation on your contest win. I like your artwork choice it goes well with your message. Best wishes!
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Your 100 word story is intertaining with a fun ending. I enjoyed reading it and congratuation on your contest win. I like your artwork choice it goes well with your message. Best wishes!
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
Comment from Y. M. Roger
yes!! A wonderful day out in the wild without a mask! ;) :) Fun offering for the contest here - thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
hamper then we --> hamper, then we
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yes!! A wonderful day out in the wild without a mask! ;) :) Fun offering for the contest here - thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
hamper then we --> hamper, then we
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the 100 Word Story writing prompt contest. Perfect family outing....I love icecream too. Good word count. Good luck in the contest.
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Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the 100 Word Story writing prompt contest. Perfect family outing....I love icecream too. Good word count. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written hundred word flash fiction about the say out at the river with a little fire to cook thd sausages and after a lovely day requests for ice cream ends the perfect day out.
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A very well-written hundred word flash fiction about the say out at the river with a little fire to cook thd sausages and after a lovely day requests for ice cream ends the perfect day out.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine family picnic here with all the ingredients of for a fun filled day, letting our hair down and enjoying naughty treats, I enjoyed the scene, love Dolly x
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A fine family picnic here with all the ingredients of for a fun filled day, letting our hair down and enjoying naughty treats, I enjoyed the scene, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a great entry for the 100 Word Story writing prompt. It had my attention from beginning to end, and I chuckled at the humorous end. Who doesn't like ice cream? Best of luck in the contest!
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This is a great entry for the 100 Word Story writing prompt. It had my attention from beginning to end, and I chuckled at the humorous end. Who doesn't like ice cream? Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
Comment from Patty Palmer
You described a perfectly wonderful outing with the family that we've missed out on all year. You used each word given in the directions for the contest, Good luck!
Patty
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You described a perfectly wonderful outing with the family that we've missed out on all year. You used each word given in the directions for the contest, Good luck!
Patty
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 100 Word Story contest.
This short story is clear and fun.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 100 Word Story contest.
This short story is clear and fun.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a fun contest entry, Mystery Author. I enjoyed the light-hearted approach to the prompt. You used the required words well to tell this little story. They all fit in nicely--never forced. The image is a good pairing, too.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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What a fun contest entry, Mystery Author. I enjoyed the light-hearted approach to the prompt. You used the required words well to tell this little story. They all fit in nicely--never forced. The image is a good pairing, too.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Thank you!
