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Fall Foliage and Festivities

Four seasons contest entry

3 total reviews 
Comment from writer723
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I really enjoyed your story of your favorite season. Your descriptions caught my attention and drew me in. I could imagine the colors of the season and the activities you mentioned. Working at an ice cream stand and grill sounds like fun. Very nice details you provided.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
    Dear writer 723, thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from amada
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I am glad you selected Autumn becase that is my favorite season as well. I wrote a couple of lines about it...but the liens you write are awesome, I like the best those leaves falling down...peacefully.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
    Dear amada, thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. It is well-written, descriptive with great imagery, and flows smoothly. Readers can easily tell Fall/Autumn is your favorite season. Your many examples of why you like it best support your choice.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
    Dear Jan, thank you for your comments and review.