I'm a Bit Irate
Feelings contest entry23 total reviews
Comment from equestrik
This is a very strong and well written poem and it fits the 'feelings' contest well. I have feelings on this and agree with some of what you write but I am working to educate myself and have learned a great deal. The best thing I have read is "Caste" . It made me aware and it made me consider.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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This is a very strong and well written poem and it fits the 'feelings' contest well. I have feelings on this and agree with some of what you write but I am working to educate myself and have learned a great deal. The best thing I have read is "Caste" . It made me aware and it made me consider.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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I'll have to be sure to find that myself and give it a read. Thank you for the excellent review and generous stars, equestrik. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Dylon Handlen
Very good it's relatable but this type of writing you unfortunately are only connecting with half the people. Although yes it is your own emotions and feelings try to not be one sided. But I am on your side and I agree with you! This stuff needs to end and is only making things worse at the end of the day!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Very good it's relatable but this type of writing you unfortunately are only connecting with half the people. Although yes it is your own emotions and feelings try to not be one sided. But I am on your side and I agree with you! This stuff needs to end and is only making things worse at the end of the day!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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The sad part is that I'm not the one being one sided. Hopefully that will change some day. Thank you for the great review and 4 star rating, Dylon.
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I agree but the sad part is they also think there in the right and they deserve to be acting like they do! But keep doing what your doing it was a good read
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It's just that I'm tired of hearing it everywhere, every day. What is to be the end result of all these protests? Yes, those cops should be held accountable but does that mean that the black race doesn't have the same rights as everyone else? They do. I just don't like it when it's said that they don't. Thanks again for the review.
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I agree! The end result will honestly cause more racism and tension. They have the same rights and same opportunity as the white kid next to him in the class room It?s all about the upbringing of a child I was raised with a very nice family yet I still went to the streets while my friend who is black was raised in the projects and yet he owns a business as a black man. We all have our own choices in life and that?s what makes us or breaks us
Comment from QC Poet
When arguing either side of equalities success one shows the system at worst has room for improvement hence the disagreement. I irateness is frustration looking for peace of mind, Best Wishes and God Bless you With your Feelings Poem Contest Entry Submission.
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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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When arguing either side of equalities success one shows the system at worst has room for improvement hence the disagreement. I irateness is frustration looking for peace of mind, Best Wishes and God Bless you With your Feelings Poem Contest Entry Submission.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the great review, QCP. Equality is what I seem to be missing as far as improvement, when we all have the same. I really appreciate the generous stars, Q. Have yourself a great weekend.
