senryu (you have won my heart)
In appreciation of love's tender touch.2 total reviews
Comment from palmart
Love is always welcome, despite it asks for (no more, no less than) your heart. A tender love touch is just one representation of love, but it reflects many sides of love. The consequence of that is that the receiver of the heart touch feels the humanity of handing it to the lover. As true love is a mutual, reciprocal feeling, so you only get what you give.
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Love is always welcome, despite it asks for (no more, no less than) your heart. A tender love touch is just one representation of love, but it reflects many sides of love. The consequence of that is that the receiver of the heart touch feels the humanity of handing it to the lover. As true love is a mutual, reciprocal feeling, so you only get what you give.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
Comment from Bill Schott
This senryu, You Have Won My Heart, presented as a 5-7-5, announces what someone already knew and after 'fingering' it out.
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This senryu, You Have Won My Heart, presented as a 5-7-5, announces what someone already knew and after 'fingering' it out.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
