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Renga Multi-Author Book

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Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7

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Comment from donette1914
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outstanding on your mind dance
very well written and your words flow so well on this well penned poem, very creative and believable
the artwork went very well to make this come to life
I hope the very best in contest
it was a pleasure

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much. It is for the multi-author book called "Renga".
Comment from Ben B.
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Ok, that one got very trippy. I could have sworn I saw the image get warped just by looking at it. It image looks deeper than it actually is. Nice couplet

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    The same reason. I have to post it again using a different name.
    Thanks.