Comment from scongrove

Exceptional

Great writing, my friend! :)

This was so heartfelt. The skin on my arms prickled reading this. You have a wonderful way with words. You definitely moved me.

Thanks for sharing!
Hugs,
Shana :)

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020

Thank you so much for all the stars. Truly appreciated.

reply by scongrove on 25-Nov-2020

You are very welcome my friend :)

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

The picture really does make the piece shine. Excellently done and i love the repititions of the last line especially in the last stanza. Very well done in rhyme and flow

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020

I truly appreciate your comments. Thank you ever so much for the review.

Comment from Sally Law

Exceptional

This is really beautiful, dear Faye. I love the tandem story of mother and daughter. This is very creative and uniquely illustrated. Marvelous offering!!

Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs...xo.....

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020

THANK YOU! How greatly I appreciate your review.
XOs,
Faye

Comment from roof35

Excellent

This is a lovely and poignant poem. You told a whole life story in your poetic words. It flows beautifully and it is well rhymed. It is an excellent entry for the contest. Good luck.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020

Thank you. I deeply appreciate your reviewing, as well as your good luck wish.

Comment from Taurus the Elder

Excellent

Very good. I like the repetition of the line, "softly she did sigh". Technically sound, good art work, solid ending. Emotional strong work, great job, good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020

Thank you so much. Your comments, along with the good luck wish are truly appreciated.