eviction
Six word poetry contest43 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"eviction", is short, succinct and very well-written. With a minimum of words, this talented poet, has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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"eviction", is short, succinct and very well-written. With a minimum of words, this talented poet, has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Duchess, for this excellent review. I'm happy this piece has been so well received.
God bless!
Neonewman,
You're very welcome. Your piece deserves to have been well received!
God bless, take care and keep safe!
the Duchess
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Smiles!
Smiles to you!
Comment from donette1914
very interesting poem how leaves fall victim to summer's eviction
very well written and your words flow so well on this well penned poem, very creative and believable
the artwork went very well to make this come to life
I hope the very best in contest
it was a pleasure
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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very interesting poem how leaves fall victim to summer's eviction
very well written and your words flow so well on this well penned poem, very creative and believable
the artwork went very well to make this come to life
I hope the very best in contest
it was a pleasure
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Donette, for this excellent review and support.
God Bless!
Comment from Eternal Muse
Very witty and clever. I thought you were talking about a real eviction (lol). I like your metaphor of autumn eviction. Stunning artistic presentation and visuals. Good luck in this contest, this should do very well.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Very witty and clever. I thought you were talking about a real eviction (lol). I like your metaphor of autumn eviction. Stunning artistic presentation and visuals. Good luck in this contest, this should do very well.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Eternal Muse. I enjoy crafting these little guys.
God bless
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Nice 6 word poem for the contest. Leaves fall victim to summers eviction. Good wording suggesting autumn leaves falling at summers end. Absolutely beautiful colourful visual of the autumn leaves on the ground.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Nice 6 word poem for the contest. Leaves fall victim to summers eviction. Good wording suggesting autumn leaves falling at summers end. Absolutely beautiful colourful visual of the autumn leaves on the ground.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Joanne, for this most excellent review. I enjoy crafting these shorts.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from Tina Crute
I never thought of Fall as being the result of Summer being evicted, exactly, so I enjoyed your poem. It always moves me that dead leaves are so beautiful. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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I never thought of Fall as being the result of Summer being evicted, exactly, so I enjoyed your poem. It always moves me that dead leaves are so beautiful. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Tina. I love this time of the year.
God bless
Steve
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I do too!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written six-word poem about leaves falling victim to summer's eviction right on time each year without fail seasons change while we look on and see the changes happening.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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A very well-written six-word poem about leaves falling victim to summer's eviction right on time each year without fail seasons change while we look on and see the changes happening.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Yes, I love this time of the year. Thank you for the awesome review, Sandra.
God bless
Steve
Comment from nomi338
Please forgive me if I show no sympathy for the newly evicted leaves as I am the poor chump who has to rake them and bag them for removal. It is no fun and I do not look forward at all to work that is required to accomplish this back breaking task. As to their sad eviction, I say: "Bah, good riddance!"
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Please forgive me if I show no sympathy for the newly evicted leaves as I am the poor chump who has to rake them and bag them for removal. It is no fun and I do not look forward at all to work that is required to accomplish this back breaking task. As to their sad eviction, I say: "Bah, good riddance!"
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Oh, I feel your pain, my friend. I believe I will invest in a leaf blower this year. Thank you for the awesome review and I hope your labor is light this year.
God bless
Steve
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Thanks, I think that I may well farm the work out to a teen in need of a few bucks.
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Now that's an idea! Hmm, my twin great-nephews come to mind lol.
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There you go.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was a clever way of wording that period of the leaves lives. It's a reminder of all those people who are also being evicted due to the virus closing their work places. Well done and good luck! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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That was a clever way of wording that period of the leaves lives. It's a reminder of all those people who are also being evicted due to the virus closing their work places. Well done and good luck! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Sandra, for the excellent review. I enjoy the challenges these shorts bring. This year has certainly been harsh on most of us.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
I wish i had a six for you this is my favorite six word contest entry.I think you will do very well as long as the voters read them all. they seem to pick an choose and not read them all but good luck my friend
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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I wish i had a six for you this is my favorite six word contest entry.I think you will do very well as long as the voters read them all. they seem to pick an choose and not read them all but good luck my friend
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Your words alone are better than any six star review Abby. Thank you for reading my work. This contest will be judged by the committee. I've entered a few of them, but actually do better in the public voting arena lol.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Reese Turner
Great picture! Obviously, these leaves fell in a place with no wind! It brings the word "fantasy" to me as in Texas, Summer maintains squatters rights well into November.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Great picture! Obviously, these leaves fell in a place with no wind! It brings the word "fantasy" to me as in Texas, Summer maintains squatters rights well into November.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Love the term "squatters" used in this awesome review, Reese. I will have to invest in a leaf blower this year.
God bless
Steve
