eviction
Six word poetry contest44 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Clever. Concise. I owe you six more. Ihope you don't run out anytime soon. What is yout take on John Wayne movies, K.D.Lang singing, Dune cologne, and fried chicken? Karen
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Clever. Concise. I owe you six more. Ihope you don't run out anytime soon. What is yout take on John Wayne movies, K.D.Lang singing, Dune cologne, and fried chicken? Karen
Comment Written 12-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Dad ruined westerns for me. It was 24/7 with him. I did like Rooster Cogburn in true grit. We had fried chicken tonight, if that tells you anything, lol. Don't know what Dune smells like, I use Polo blue and K.D. Lang is good, lean more toward rock.
God bless,
Steve
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fried chicken is right there behind bacon on the food I love list. I am jealous and salivating. :-)
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At work, we used to have chicken embrochette appetizers. deep fried wrapped in bacon.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Congrats on your prize! So clever and whimsical--impressive internal alliteration (to coin a term) re VICTIm and eVICTIon. Glad I caught up to this! Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Congrats on your prize! So clever and whimsical--impressive internal alliteration (to coin a term) re VICTIm and eVICTIon. Glad I caught up to this! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Elizabeth for the awesome review. Sorry about the delayed response.
God bless
Steve
Comment from lyenochka
Very poetically said! I like the repetition of the "vict" in "victim" and "eviction." Great personification of the season of Summer. Congratulations in placing in the contest!
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Very poetically said! I like the repetition of the "vict" in "victim" and "eviction." Great personification of the season of Summer. Congratulations in placing in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Lyenochka. I had fun with this one.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Melissa Russell Deur
Congratulations on your Third Place win! I love the phrase "leaves fall victim" as it plays two ways: leaves fall and fall victim. What a wonderful and arresting thought: Summer's eviction. It does seem as if Summer suddenly gets kicked out! The interplay of "victim" and "eviction" is clever, especially with the repetition of the "vic" sound!
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Congratulations on your Third Place win! I love the phrase "leaves fall victim" as it plays two ways: leaves fall and fall victim. What a wonderful and arresting thought: Summer's eviction. It does seem as if Summer suddenly gets kicked out! The interplay of "victim" and "eviction" is clever, especially with the repetition of the "vic" sound!
Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Melissa, for this most excellent, inspiring review.
God bless
Steve
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I'm glad you are back to writing!
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Thank you.
Comment from Wabigoon
Neo-
I would think it would be winter's eviction, or fall's, or that's what I'd expect regarding the usual thinking about the seasons. Hard to create a poems in so few words. Nice try.
Best
Wabigoon/Jeff
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Neo-
I would think it would be winter's eviction, or fall's, or that's what I'd expect regarding the usual thinking about the seasons. Hard to create a poems in so few words. Nice try.
Best
Wabigoon/Jeff
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Jeff.
God bless
Steve
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I see that what you mean is summer is being evicted, not that it is summer's eviction of something. That makes the poem better but, dammit, tricky, dependent upon that understanding.
Jeff
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LOL! Yeah, I love play on words. Messes with the masses. Thank you, Jeff.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Neonewman, this is a really well thought out six words. It is not easy to get a message across with only six words but you have very cleverly done so. Good use of metaphor and a lovely picture. Very well done. Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Hello Neonewman, this is a really well thought out six words. It is not easy to get a message across with only six words but you have very cleverly done so. Good use of metaphor and a lovely picture. Very well done. Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Dorothy. I love crafting these short pieces.
God bless!
Comment from Cindy Decker
Your poem is an excellent way of saying Summer turned to Fall. Very artistic six word poem. This is a really good contest contender.
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Your poem is an excellent way of saying Summer turned to Fall. Very artistic six word poem. This is a really good contest contender.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Cindy. I enjoyed the challenge and love this time of the year.
God bless!
Comment from Mastery
Hi Steve. methinks you must have taken time away from the site for a while, because I've not seen you in a long time. Weren't you working on a book last time you were on here?
Anyway, I like this little offering. "Victim" and "eviction" have aa nice ring when used in the same poem, don't they? I Hope all is well with you, my friend.
I am working on my fifth novel for publishing as we speak. Take a look if you have time. :) Bob
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Hi Steve. methinks you must have taken time away from the site for a while, because I've not seen you in a long time. Weren't you working on a book last time you were on here?
Anyway, I like this little offering. "Victim" and "eviction" have aa nice ring when used in the same poem, don't they? I Hope all is well with you, my friend.
I am working on my fifth novel for publishing as we speak. Take a look if you have time. :) Bob
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Bob, Great to hear from you, my friend. Excited to hear about your new novel. This year as you know has been crazy and full of ups and downs. I have a publisher interested in my novel and want a series of three. They also want me to have the second completed and the third started before we move forward. I will certainly find time in the near future to catch up on yours. Thank you for the great review.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a striking presentation, obviously in full compliance with the prompt - the picture is a perfect complement to the write. Best wishes in the contest...
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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In my opinion, a striking presentation, obviously in full compliance with the prompt - the picture is a perfect complement to the write. Best wishes in the contest...
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Thank you for another awesome review, evesayshi.
God bless!
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You are very welcome...Eve
Comment from Lulube
Great imagery, Well descriptive words placed in the right order, to deliver a total picture. Well done, and all the best in the contest. Wonderful photo to go with your poem
lulube
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Great imagery, Well descriptive words placed in the right order, to deliver a total picture. Well done, and all the best in the contest. Wonderful photo to go with your poem
lulube
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Lulube, for this most Exceptional review. This sixer has certainly brightened my morning.
God bless!