What Breaks My Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Tattered Memories"Poems and stories tellin' it like I see it.
3 total reviews
Comment from scongrove
Very captivating, Faye :) The artwork is perfect for your post. I can feel the emotions you poured into this. I think this is something many of us can relate to. Many of our past memories are painful, but they do make us what we are today.
Great writing, my friend! Thanks for sharing.
Hugs,
Shana :)
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Very captivating, Faye :) The artwork is perfect for your post. I can feel the emotions you poured into this. I think this is something many of us can relate to. Many of our past memories are painful, but they do make us what we are today.
Great writing, my friend! Thanks for sharing.
Hugs,
Shana :)
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Thank you ever so much, Shana, my friend, for the lovely stars. Greatly appreciated.
Hugs,
Faye
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You're very welcome and very deserved :)
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Hugs back to you and have a great weekend, Shana, my friend.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello fm!
A well-crafted Loop poem that most assuredly draws in the reader to contemplate "tattered memories."
Your poem flows well, and is filled with emotion.
A fine rendering!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Hello fm!
A well-crafted Loop poem that most assuredly draws in the reader to contemplate "tattered memories."
Your poem flows well, and is filled with emotion.
A fine rendering!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Thank you ever so much. I deeply appreciate your comments, the best wishes, and rating.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a beautiful rhyming loop offering here, Faye -- how many regrets do we have looking back through the years... sigh. :/ :/ Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Such a beautiful rhyming loop offering here, Faye -- how many regrets do we have looking back through the years... sigh. :/ :/ Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Thank you. I truly appreciate you taking the time to review it. I also thank you for your comments, including the part about good luck in the contest, and the rating.