The Magician
100 Word Horror Poem Contest Entry5 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Perfect - exactly what the doctor ordered for this contest here -- well done, mystery author! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! :) ;)
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Perfect - exactly what the doctor ordered for this contest here -- well done, mystery author! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! :) ;)
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Yvette. I'm glad you liked this twisted piece.
=]
Ron
Comment from Rashanna Popoola
Wow this poem was a bit scary for me. It has that kind of fright that pops out at you when you think everything's over with but theirs a twist. Well done Writer!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Wow this poem was a bit scary for me. It has that kind of fright that pops out at you when you think everything's over with but theirs a twist. Well done Writer!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Rashanna. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked my twisted little surprise ending. Have yourself a great weekend.
Ron
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-hundred-word horror poem, The Magician, has the necessary word count and shows us a man to keep an eye out for.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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This one-hundred-word horror poem, The Magician, has the necessary word count and shows us a man to keep an eye out for.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Hahaha. Thank you for the hilarious review, Bill. As always, I really appreciate the generous stars, friend.
Ron
Comment from Father Flaps
Great Scot! This is definitely a horror story, Mystery Author. It sounds like a serial killer with a specific interest in little kids.
The last verse is the killer,
"So now I have her chained and gagged
to muffle out her cries.
I open up my trophy jar
that, too, will hold her eyes." ... creepy! This should do well in the contest. Good Luck!
Cheers,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Great Scot! This is definitely a horror story, Mystery Author. It sounds like a serial killer with a specific interest in little kids.
The last verse is the killer,
"So now I have her chained and gagged
to muffle out her cries.
I open up my trophy jar
that, too, will hold her eyes." ... creepy! This should do well in the contest. Good Luck!
Cheers,
Kimbob
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the awesome review, Kimbob. Yeah, I was definitely going for the creepy aspect here. lol I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes, friend. I'm glad you found this twisted piece worth reviewing because I know not many on here would. Have yourself a great day and thank you again.
Comment from Sanku
Oh! God , that is unbearable to think about. What is she a collector of eyes
Your poem very successfully emanates horror and shock.Rhyming too. All the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Oh! God , that is unbearable to think about. What is she a collector of eyes
Your poem very successfully emanates horror and shock.Rhyming too. All the best for the contest.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Thanks for the great review, Sanku. I was actually writing from a sick guy's point of view. Yes, that's the jar is filled with, trophy eyes. I appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes for this twisted piece. Have a great day.