The Culprit
Cat gone nuts.4 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
It as an awful to think that the dog woulfd kill a bird and yet...it seemed almost predictable that a cat might be the culprit. It is more in keeping with the mischievious, impish, deviant personality of a cat. I like how we explored with the speaker. Well planned.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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It as an awful to think that the dog woulfd kill a bird and yet...it seemed almost predictable that a cat might be the culprit. It is more in keeping with the mischievious, impish, deviant personality of a cat. I like how we explored with the speaker. Well planned.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! Oh yeah, my outdoor kitties are bird-catchers extraordinaire (wink, wink)! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! :) ;)
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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LOL! Oh yeah, my outdoor kitties are bird-catchers extraordinaire (wink, wink)! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! :) ;)
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from F. William Lester
Nasty feline! Interesting style and form. I am not a poet and my concept of poetry is more rhythm and rhyme. This sounds like it could be written as prose. That's not a criticism but an observation by an outsider. I liked the story and think you did a good job. I'm only constrained by my own ignorance. Good work. Keep writing and stay well.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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Nasty feline! Interesting style and form. I am not a poet and my concept of poetry is more rhythm and rhyme. This sounds like it could be written as prose. That's not a criticism but an observation by an outsider. I liked the story and think you did a good job. I'm only constrained by my own ignorance. Good work. Keep writing and stay well.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from F. William Lester
Nasty feline! Interesting style and form. I am not a poet and my concept of poetry is more rhythm and rhyme. This sounds like it could be written as prose. That's not a criticism but an observation by an outsider. I liked the story and think you did a good job. I'm only constrained by my own ignorance. Good work. Keep writing and stay well.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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Nasty feline! Interesting style and form. I am not a poet and my concept of poetry is more rhythm and rhyme. This sounds like it could be written as prose. That's not a criticism but an observation by an outsider. I liked the story and think you did a good job. I'm only constrained by my own ignorance. Good work. Keep writing and stay well.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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Thanks!