Mr. Justice
A Justice steps up to help.26 total reviews
Comment from robyn corum
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How cool. There are some things that rise above our human arguments and disagreements. I would have to hope that when the chips are down, we are all still human at heart and still care about the bigger picture. This was well written and provided a great message. Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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T,
How cool. There are some things that rise above our human arguments and disagreements. I would have to hope that when the chips are down, we are all still human at heart and still care about the bigger picture. This was well written and provided a great message. Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your story. This story meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! I like it. Good luck on the contest!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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I have enjoyed reading your story. This story meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! I like it. Good luck on the contest!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much.
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You're welcome! :)
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello TEOLS2016.
This is an interesting story with an unexpected setting. The dialogue stresses the danger in the court. You have written a flash with a setting that is on people's minds these days.
Nicely done with active verbs and descriptions featuring power packed sentences. Good job.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Hello TEOLS2016.
This is an interesting story with an unexpected setting. The dialogue stresses the danger in the court. You have written a flash with a setting that is on people's minds these days.
Nicely done with active verbs and descriptions featuring power packed sentences. Good job.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much.
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You're welcome
Comment from Ben B.
An interesting choice of flash fiction, but I'm seeing a little contradiction here. Carol was sick that day yet she was there? Was she lying about her whereabouts for some reason?
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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An interesting choice of flash fiction, but I'm seeing a little contradiction here. Carol was sick that day yet she was there? Was she lying about her whereabouts for some reason?
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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No, she wasn't there. The woman who spoke was one of her clerks. Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Hm, Vietnam training and exposure came in handy in this story, and even enables the main character to save an opponent. I guess in the face of danger we are all allays. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Hm, Vietnam training and exposure came in handy in this story, and even enables the main character to save an opponent. I guess in the face of danger we are all allays. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Thank you kindly.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written flash fiction. Many people have different opinions and interests. We don't need to embrace our colleagues every day but bin times of emergency we help each other.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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A very well-written flash fiction. Many people have different opinions and interests. We don't need to embrace our colleagues every day but bin times of emergency we help each other.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Exactly. Thank you.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
There is an associate justice of the Supreme Court lying in state today. Soon her memorial will take place. She was such an icon for women's rights. If a shooting occurred, as in your story, what would she have done?
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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There is an associate justice of the Supreme Court lying in state today. Soon her memorial will take place. She was such an icon for women's rights. If a shooting occurred, as in your story, what would she have done?
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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I'd have liked to think she too put idology aside, like Carol Willet and Craig.
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I'm sure she would have....
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Your ending brought this whole tense story together nicely. Helping others even when on opposite sides, without thinking of your own safety, sends out a strong moral, one that needs to be seen more often in real life. Being an ex serviceman shows his training and instincts are never forgotten. Well done and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Your ending brought this whole tense story together nicely. Helping others even when on opposite sides, without thinking of your own safety, sends out a strong moral, one that needs to be seen more often in real life. Being an ex serviceman shows his training and instincts are never forgotten. Well done and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Thank you kindly.
Comment from Sanku
Yes. Whatever we hear these days there is still goodness in ll human beings.When threatened we instinctively think of others, This is what he has done .A very feel good story.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Yes. Whatever we hear these days there is still goodness in ll human beings.When threatened we instinctively think of others, This is what he has done .A very feel good story.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Thanks. I was going for that.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry reads well. It is suspenseful as to what is happening and will they all survive. The justice who saved the three from the library was awesome. His training served him well--something no military man would ever forget. I like that it didn't matter they were on different sides in the courtroom.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Your contest entry reads well. It is suspenseful as to what is happening and will they all survive. The justice who saved the three from the library was awesome. His training served him well--something no military man would ever forget. I like that it didn't matter they were on different sides in the courtroom.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 22-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Thank you kindly.
