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Renga Multi-Author Book

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Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7

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Comment from Jasmine Girl
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I like this simple poem about the daybreak. Yes, it is indeed brilliant and full of hope. Aren't we all grateful for the beautiful nature?
I'm wondering what happened to all my contributions to this book? They have all disappeared. I thought you liked one of them.
Thanks. Let me know why. Maybe I can post them again as personal poetries.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
    What? That's really weird and it has never happened before. I will check the book and get back to you.

    Thank you very much for your review.
Comment from June Sargent
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Yes, all creation heralds the dawn of a new day. New opportunities to savor and enjoy life to the fullest. We should let go of yesterday and embrace today. Lovely addition to your book.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
    Thank you very much, June. I appreciate your kind words and review.

    Hugs
    Gypsy
Comment from Joan E.
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Thank you for inspiring FanStorians to participate in another Renga. I admired your description of the "break of day" in this 5-7-5 and look forward to the 7-7 couplet and subsequent additions. The striking picture should help to inspire our poets as well. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
    Thank you very much, Joan, I appreciate your time and kind review.

    Hugs,

    Gypsy
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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You are so good at expressing feelings, or emotions. It makes your delicate poetry of Eastern origins well-balanced, and easier for the non-expert to follow. Thank you for coordinating the assembly of this book - a complex task I am sure.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
    Thank you very much, Katherine. I really appreciate your loyal reviewing and wonderful feedback. Have a great Sunday. :)

    hugs,
    gypsy
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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I am glad you gave the explanation of sentient.
It did wonderous for me.
It open your poem to the
This reader's senses to the morning when I step out the door every morning to look at the day just before dawn is breaking
Good job.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
    Thank you very much, Mary. I really appreciate your reviewing and wonderful feedback. Have a great Sunday. :)

    hugs,
    gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
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That sounds like a wonderful thing - all of creation giving God thanks for the "break of day" as the hymn says, "like the first morning" of Creation. If only mankind would be in harmony with all creation in their gratitude.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
    Thank you very much, Helen. I really appreciate your loyal reviewing and wonderful feedback. Have a great Sunday. :)

    hugs,
    gypsy