Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "For Andy"My book of poems and stories
13 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
The violence in the inner cities is so disheartening and beyond scary... ;) :) A great offering for the septolet contest here - thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;) :)
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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The violence in the inner cities is so disheartening and beyond scary... ;) :) A great offering for the septolet contest here - thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;) :)
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thanks for a wonderful review.
Comment from Boogienights
This is a very well written and sad poem about the horrendous shootings that have been happening lately. Your poem has quite an emotional impact on the reader. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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This is a very well written and sad poem about the horrendous shootings that have been happening lately. Your poem has quite an emotional impact on the reader. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Thank you. It was terrible losing my child.
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I'm so sorry, I didn't realize that you were talking about your own child. How does God let something like this happen? I'm not sure I could survive it. Again, my sincere condolences.
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No Problem. It just slipped out. Sorry on my part as I can usually not let my feelings slip like that. I am sorry if I caused you any discomfort. Not my aim at all. We are all adjusting to the loss.
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You know another thing, we may not see but there is always a reason. I will never lose faith and know I will see my child again.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These few words are very powerful and shocking too and it is so tragic finding ourselves in the wrong place at the wrong time, very sad and emotion words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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These few words are very powerful and shocking too and it is so tragic finding ourselves in the wrong place at the wrong time, very sad and emotion words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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Thank you
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, They are a perfect match.
I found it to be divine even though a babies dies from a stray bullet.
I pray for mind and everyone child night and day this capture my attention from the first line to the last
this is what i call a food for thought poem.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, They are a perfect match.
I found it to be divine even though a babies dies from a stray bullet.
I pray for mind and everyone child night and day this capture my attention from the first line to the last
this is what i call a food for thought poem.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much. This was a hard one to finally release.
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Your very welcome.
God be with you and yours.
Cookie
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Simple poem that has impact to remember lives lost by violence
Well worded to give the reader a punch with words that show the impact
Good luck with the contest
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Simple poem that has impact to remember lives lost by violence
Well worded to give the reader a punch with words that show the impact
Good luck with the contest
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your kind review. I hesitated before posting this one buy thought "I am not the only one. There are more who have lost a child this way".
Comment from Dawn Munro
What a powerful septolet poem this is, and one that should be placed on a bulletin board and posted throughout our major cities, IMHO. Not that it would deter the criminals, but it might serve to enhance reporting of crime by the public.
Excellent!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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What a powerful septolet poem this is, and one that should be placed on a bulletin board and posted throughout our major cities, IMHO. Not that it would deter the criminals, but it might serve to enhance reporting of crime by the public.
Excellent!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Thank you for reviewing and the kind way you have given support. I appreciate your time. Stay safe and well.
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You are very welcome. You also stay safe and well!
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
You have to wonder if those people who are callous enough to be shooting off guns in crowded and awkward places even care if their bullets hit the wrong target. These people and their reasoning is far beyond me.
Your post is sad. It reminds us of the fragility of life. And the fact it's supposed to be our job to GUARD IT not destroy.
Good job on the word count, though I MIGHT consider increasing and/or bolding the font to help it stand out better against the dark background.
Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Dear Mystery Writer,
You have to wonder if those people who are callous enough to be shooting off guns in crowded and awkward places even care if their bullets hit the wrong target. These people and their reasoning is far beyond me.
Your post is sad. It reminds us of the fragility of life. And the fact it's supposed to be our job to GUARD IT not destroy.
Good job on the word count, though I MIGHT consider increasing and/or bolding the font to help it stand out better against the dark background.
Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Very good tip. I hadn't thought of that. I really appreciate it when I get a good tip from a reviewer. Thank you so much. Stay well and safe.
Comment from Bill Schott
This septuplet, For Andy, brings up the worst part of the sad effects of crime like this. Bullets fly from illegal guns in the hands of cowardly thugs and ironically kill the innocent.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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This septuplet, For Andy, brings up the worst part of the sad effects of crime like this. Bullets fly from illegal guns in the hands of cowardly thugs and ironically kill the innocent.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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I do so appreciate the time and kindness you have shown in reviewing this post. I was hesitant to put it out there for the world to see but it helps to do so.
Comment from mermaids
Your words are sad and so true. Many young lives have been lost to stray bullets. Your poem pays tribute to those individuals and is relevant to today's world. "Wrong place, Wrong time," are words true to life.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Your words are sad and so true. Many young lives have been lost to stray bullets. Your poem pays tribute to those individuals and is relevant to today's world. "Wrong place, Wrong time," are words true to life.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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I do so appreciate the time and kindness you have shown in reviewing this post. I was hesitant to put it out there for the world to see but it helps to do so.
Comment from equestrik
This kind of thing should never happen. When folks are more concerned with their own agenda and anger they forget about others including the innocent ones. Good write with an important message.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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This kind of thing should never happen. When folks are more concerned with their own agenda and anger they forget about others including the innocent ones. Good write with an important message.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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The loss was tremendous and so unnecessary. Thank you so much for your kind review.
