Follow The Yellow Brick Road
The Wizard of Oz15 total reviews
Comment from Alchera
A perfectly rhymed writing prompt entry: internal rhymes: "shoes/muse", ending rhymes: "click/brick". Both verses have exact: six syllables counting as required by the Essence poem contest, too.The Subject title: Follow the yellow brick road- well describe indicating the exact functions that the guest-girl should act, cat walking, like a muse, along the road: yellow muse of brick, wearing her clicking ruby shoes.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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A perfectly rhymed writing prompt entry: internal rhymes: "shoes/muse", ending rhymes: "click/brick". Both verses have exact: six syllables counting as required by the Essence poem contest, too.The Subject title: Follow the yellow brick road- well describe indicating the exact functions that the guest-girl should act, cat walking, like a muse, along the road: yellow muse of brick, wearing her clicking ruby shoes.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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thank you for the review and all the stars***!!
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You deserve them all! Take care! Tony
Comment from Tessa Kay
You summed up the essence of The Wizard of Oz in two lines that flow very well. This could easily be a tag line for the movie. I think you captured the prompt perfectly. Very well done.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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You summed up the essence of The Wizard of Oz in two lines that flow very well. This could easily be a tag line for the movie. I think you captured the prompt perfectly. Very well done.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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DID you just give me Six Stars???!!!?
i cant. this is too good..
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Comment from oliver818
This is a very good entry for this essence competition as you sun up nicely the main ideas of "The wizard of Oz". I especially like the part "yellow muse of brick," it's very clever. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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This is a very good entry for this essence competition as you sun up nicely the main ideas of "The wizard of Oz". I especially like the part "yellow muse of brick," it's very clever. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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thanks, im glad you liked it
Comment from A Little Bird
Congratulations on this simple, yet effective piece. My friends recently named their newborn baby Dorothy. Was the image of your own creation? If so, if I knew I would have given you an extra star! Anyway, good luck with the competition.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Congratulations on this simple, yet effective piece. My friends recently named their newborn baby Dorothy. Was the image of your own creation? If so, if I knew I would have given you an extra star! Anyway, good luck with the competition.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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my moms name.was dorothy too..no, i cant take credit for the image
Comment from sammielwf
As one of the most colorful and gruff-pretend characters in the story says..
I do believe in this poem.
I do!
I do!
I cast my vote for this colorful and childhood memory recalling story and I really would not change anything..
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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As one of the most colorful and gruff-pretend characters in the story says..
I do believe in this poem.
I do!
I do!
I cast my vote for this colorful and childhood memory recalling story and I really would not change anything..
Comment Written 22-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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THANKS VERY MUCH!
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hey, by the way, im glad you believed in my poem!
thank you, Carlos' girl
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the Essence poem contest writing prompt. I like the rhythm and presentation. I see the internal rhyme too. Good luck in the contest. Best one so far
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the Essence poem contest writing prompt. I like the rhythm and presentation. I see the internal rhyme too. Good luck in the contest. Best one so far
Comment Written 22-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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wow, Thank You!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written two line essence poem with inner and end rhyme to bring a message across to the reader of red Ruby shoes clicking on a yellow brick road.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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A very well-written two line essence poem with inner and end rhyme to bring a message across to the reader of red Ruby shoes clicking on a yellow brick road.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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thank you for the review
Comment from lyenochka
That's really clever. You did a movie summary in this very demanding format with the internal and end rhymes! And the rhymes are creative, too! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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That's really clever. You did a movie summary in this very demanding format with the internal and end rhymes! And the rhymes are creative, too! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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thank you
Comment from Colin John
Hi, I will keep my eye on this one as it should stand out in a contest, as you can relate it to the film with Ruby slippers and the like. Thank you for the offering as it were. Cheers Colin
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Hi, I will keep my eye on this one as it should stand out in a contest, as you can relate it to the film with Ruby slippers and the like. Thank you for the offering as it were. Cheers Colin
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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thanks kindly
Comment from Bill Schott
This essence poem, Follow the Yellow Brick Road, has the proper formatting and alludes to images from the Wizard of Oz. These ideas bring thoughts of wish fulfillment and being somewhere better than one was before. Nice.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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This essence poem, Follow the Yellow Brick Road, has the proper formatting and alludes to images from the Wizard of Oz. These ideas bring thoughts of wish fulfillment and being somewhere better than one was before. Nice.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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thank you, im glad you liked it!
