Prayers for Fanstory Family
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "My Precious Son"Prose and Poem Prayers for Fanstorians
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Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely poetic dedication for Yvonne on the loss of her son. Her heartbreak must be immeasurable, your beautiful words a comfort, for her. Nicely said
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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This is a lovely poetic dedication for Yvonne on the loss of her son. Her heartbreak must be immeasurable, your beautiful words a comfort, for her. Nicely said
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Peafrl, for your great review and comments. Both greatly appreciated.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
My Precious Son
by Jannypan (Jan)
Hello, Jan,
Heartfelt poem for Yvonne. I didn't know she lost her son, that's hard. I can't even imagine. You did a great job with the poem. She must be very pleased.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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My Precious Son
by Jannypan (Jan)
Hello, Jan,
Heartfelt poem for Yvonne. I didn't know she lost her son, that's hard. I can't even imagine. You did a great job with the poem. She must be very pleased.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Gypsy, for dropping by with a great review and comments. I appreciate your time and support.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem/prayer to comfort Yvonne to deal with the death if her son. It is very sad to lose a child and our only hope is that we may reunite again when God's plan come together.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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A very well-written heartfelt poem/prayer to comfort Yvonne to deal with the death if her son. It is very sad to lose a child and our only hope is that we may reunite again when God's plan come together.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your great review, Sandra.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment from Aussie
Amazing stain glass illustration to compliment your heartfelt chapter. Yes, you will see him again. We can't bring them back, but they surround us just like the angels. Time is a great healer, in heaven there is no time but the present. A wonderful tribute to Yvonne's son. PS thought you were taking some time off FS? Maybe it is in the quiet of writing you seek solace. K xx
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Amazing stain glass illustration to compliment your heartfelt chapter. Yes, you will see him again. We can't bring them back, but they surround us just like the angels. Time is a great healer, in heaven there is no time but the present. A wonderful tribute to Yvonne's son. PS thought you were taking some time off FS? Maybe it is in the quiet of writing you seek solace. K xx
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you,Aussie, for your great review and 6 star rating. Both mean much to me.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Jan.
This is a very well written message to Yvonne. It is such a sad situation for a parent to lose a child.
It's well written and I'm certain it is a comfort to her.
Robert
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Hello Jan.
This is a very well written message to Yvonne. It is such a sad situation for a parent to lose a child.
It's well written and I'm certain it is a comfort to her.
Robert
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you for taking time to read & review. BOth greatly appreciated.
Respectfully, Jan
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You're welcome.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
You have said it all in excellent verse with a peaceful feeling to a hard subject. Excellently stated as a path to peace, I look forward to seeing my sons again
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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You have said it all in excellent verse with a peaceful feeling to a hard subject. Excellently stated as a path to peace, I look forward to seeing my sons again
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Barb, for dropping by with a great review.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment from royowen
This looks like a fine tribute to Yvonne in which I've read many fine poems in her son's and for her grief support, this being far more subtle, in the death of God's Son, which can cause all those who believe to have the hope of eternal life. Wonderfully written Jan, smooth, tetrametric stanzas and aabb rhyming. Well dine blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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This looks like a fine tribute to Yvonne in which I've read many fine poems in her son's and for her grief support, this being far more subtle, in the death of God's Son, which can cause all those who believe to have the hope of eternal life. Wonderfully written Jan, smooth, tetrametric stanzas and aabb rhyming. Well dine blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Roy, for your detailed review.
Respectfully, Jan
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Pleasure
Comment from Mary Vigasin
You writing displays both your love and celebration of your son but also shows your pain and the comfort of your faith.
Well done in letting your reader sharing your faith with your reader.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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You writing displays both your love and celebration of your son but also shows your pain and the comfort of your faith.
Well done in letting your reader sharing your faith with your reader.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Mary, for your great review and comments. Both appreciated.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment from judiverse
Beautifully presented. There can't be any great loss than to lose a beloved child and hard to understand why it happened. The poem expresses the hope of being reunited, and how turning to God in prayer helps bring peace. Excellent monorhyme. judi
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Beautifully presented. There can't be any great loss than to lose a beloved child and hard to understand why it happened. The poem expresses the hope of being reunited, and how turning to God in prayer helps bring peace. Excellent monorhyme. judi
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Judi, for your great, detailed review and comments. Both mean much to me.
Respectfully, Jan
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You're welcome. I always admire your work. judi
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Jan, this is a lovely poem, very moving and written with really good mono-rhyme stanzas. Beautifully displayed with the virtual stained glass window - lovely work, well presented. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Hello Jan, this is a lovely poem, very moving and written with really good mono-rhyme stanzas. Beautifully displayed with the virtual stained glass window - lovely work, well presented. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Dorothy, for dropping by with a great review and comments. Both greatly appreciated.
Respectfully, Jan
