The Power of Love
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Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Life Without The Letter A writing prompt.
Your verse about the sweetness of love is well done and fun.
Good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Life Without The Letter A writing prompt.
Your verse about the sweetness of love is well done and fun.
Good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much, I really appreciate this nice review.
Comment from Mia Twysted
I like the message you are sending out here. Love is amazing and can change the world. I felt a deepness, as firm steadyness that makes me want to reach out and grab for it.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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I like the message you are sending out here. Love is amazing and can change the world. I felt a deepness, as firm steadyness that makes me want to reach out and grab for it.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for reading, I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Nice entry for the Life Without The Letter A writing prompt contest. It must be hard to write without the letter A but you did well.
The power of love is powerful and probably the best thing in life.
Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Hello anonymous
Nice entry for the Life Without The Letter A writing prompt contest. It must be hard to write without the letter A but you did well.
The power of love is powerful and probably the best thing in life.
Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you for taking time to read my poem and for your comments. Much appreciated.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem without the letter a. It seems a difficult task to write from the heart with one letter less but at least there are twentyfive more to get the message through.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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A very well-written poem without the letter a. It seems a difficult task to write from the heart with one letter less but at least there are twentyfive more to get the message through.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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You are right of course! Lots of letters to chose from. Thanks so much for reviewing my poem.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
It is not easy to write without using the letter "A" much less write a story. You did it though! I enjoyed this writing. I hope all goes well in the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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It is not easy to write without using the letter "A" much less write a story. You did it though! I enjoyed this writing. I hope all goes well in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you for reading, I'm glad you liked it. :)
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Awesome writing and did it well without the use of letter a. When nighttime fell the moonlight put its spell on lovers you could tell were bewitched. The power of love delights overcomes . I love this will it grow old? No not ever. ð???
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Awesome writing and did it well without the use of letter a. When nighttime fell the moonlight put its spell on lovers you could tell were bewitched. The power of love delights overcomes . I love this will it grow old? No not ever. ð???
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem, it's much appreciated.
Comment from AnnieDawn
A nice love poem and I could not find a single "A" in it. You composed this entry very well and I know that is a difficult task. They are going to have a tough time reviewing these posts for voting. Wouldn't want to be in their shoes. Great job.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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A nice love poem and I could not find a single "A" in it. You composed this entry very well and I know that is a difficult task. They are going to have a tough time reviewing these posts for voting. Wouldn't want to be in their shoes. Great job.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Thank you for such a nice review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from AprilViolet
A seemingly impossible task without the use of the letter A but you have done if flawlessly. I love them open as well as the artwork! Six stars!!!!!!!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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A seemingly impossible task without the use of the letter A but you have done if flawlessly. I love them open as well as the artwork! Six stars!!!!!!!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Thank you for this lovely 6 star review. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
Wow! I see no occurrences of the letter of which I will not utter. This is very impressive. I think you will do very well in this contest. On top of everything else your poem is wonderful. It's not difficult to see, you're skilled indeed.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Wow! I see no occurrences of the letter of which I will not utter. This is very impressive. I think you will do very well in this contest. On top of everything else your poem is wonderful. It's not difficult to see, you're skilled indeed.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Thanks for this fantastic 6 star review...it made my night.
Comment from Heather Schwab
It is really impressive to write for that length without the letter A! I love how you captured the uncertainty and fear of love. The part of the loneliness ached at me as it pulled me in two different directions. One, knowing that imagined love is better than loneliness, and another that they found love through the loneliness. I like it that way. Ambiguity in a poem tends to stick with me longer than the words themselves as they are forgotten in time, but the emotions remain.
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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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It is really impressive to write for that length without the letter A! I love how you captured the uncertainty and fear of love. The part of the loneliness ached at me as it pulled me in two different directions. One, knowing that imagined love is better than loneliness, and another that they found love through the loneliness. I like it that way. Ambiguity in a poem tends to stick with me longer than the words themselves as they are forgotten in time, but the emotions remain.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Thank you for this nice review and for your insightful comments. :)
