Reverie of the Poet's Pen
Without the letter 'A'...27 total reviews
Comment from Lobber
Date: After August
- L'Adieu -
Ah, alas that an "A"-less formula makes "cause and pause" - especially amidst all beautiful "art and nature" - lacking, (thankfully Labber), as an artistic "name and label," and failing as a "casual, and easy assay" -standing amid and amongst failed angry artists, (all watching), all sadly amiss (awry, askew, aslant), attempting national sabotage as an easy "ways and means" - as an attempt at making universal art as "artless and asinine" - as featuring a tasteless, unsavoury meal amongst flavourless sauces and gnashing fangs . . . alas, again - a heartfelt, sad, "A"-full rambling, - an epiphany announcing apocalyptic chaos ~ Amuck, adieu (after all) - Amuck (as always) . . . Farewell!
- An Amazing Admirer
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Date: After August
- L'Adieu -
Ah, alas that an "A"-less formula makes "cause and pause" - especially amidst all beautiful "art and nature" - lacking, (thankfully Labber), as an artistic "name and label," and failing as a "casual, and easy assay" -standing amid and amongst failed angry artists, (all watching), all sadly amiss (awry, askew, aslant), attempting national sabotage as an easy "ways and means" - as an attempt at making universal art as "artless and asinine" - as featuring a tasteless, unsavoury meal amongst flavourless sauces and gnashing fangs . . . alas, again - a heartfelt, sad, "A"-full rambling, - an epiphany announcing apocalyptic chaos ~ Amuck, adieu (after all) - Amuck (as always) . . . Farewell!
- An Amazing Admirer
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Whew!! Now this, Jer, is one heckuva review, sir!! ;) It could be said the review is a posting unto itself! ;) wink, wink Thank you so very much for your wonderful words my Amazing Admirer and for those shining stars!! Glad you enjoyed this silly no A's (without which, of course, I would have no Amazing Admirer!)... Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from robyn corum
Yvette,
Well, it's easy to see why this piece won the vote! I don't even have to read the others to know that none other could come close. Thevery opening was engaging and the fun never stopped from there.
It was like watching the whole creation process in a poem. *smile*
Congrats - well deserved!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Yvette,
Well, it's easy to see why this piece won the vote! I don't even have to read the others to know that none other could come close. Thevery opening was engaging and the fun never stopped from there.
It was like watching the whole creation process in a poem. *smile*
Congrats - well deserved!
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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You are determined to make me smile really big this morning, aren't you?! ;) :) Thanx so much for this awesome review - you know, this was a fun challenge to wrap up a day of mundane grading...lol!! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
P.S. Want a precious little black kitten?? I still have to find a home for one of this litter of four... :) ;) ;) Any friends that would like one...??? :) :) Can email you pics of parents and the little one...
Comment from Melissa Russell Deur
Congrats on your 1st Place win! I didn't spot one "A" but you deserve one!
This is a clever poem with some lovely images. I particularly like "butterflies humming 'round the midnight sun." The artwork you chose complements your poem perfectly!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Congrats on your 1st Place win! I didn't spot one "A" but you deserve one!
This is a clever poem with some lovely images. I particularly like "butterflies humming 'round the midnight sun." The artwork you chose complements your poem perfectly!
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Hey there, Melissa! So good of you to drop by for a review on this one, my lady - know that you're welcome to stop in the front porch any time!! ;) You take care out there in your corner of the universe and find some smiles this weekend! :) Yvette
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You are welcome!
Comment from Dawn Munro
I do not think there could have been a finer example of poetic language without the use of the commonly used vowel "a". Can you tell I am impressed? (Lol) Congratulations on a most well-deserved win!
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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I do not think there could have been a finer example of poetic language without the use of the commonly used vowel "a". Can you tell I am impressed? (Lol) Congratulations on a most well-deserved win!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Oh, Dawn - you always know just how to make me feel good - thanx so much for your wonderful comments and your continued support even though I know things get tough round there... be sure to give Miss Priss a nuzzle for me and y'all take care of each other!! ;) Yvette
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Always a pleasure, Yvette. :)
Comment from mermaids
I like your focus on the butterfly, a wonderful image and a good subject to focus on. Your poetic form is smooth and there is a happy feel to your words. Congrats on winning the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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I like your focus on the butterfly, a wonderful image and a good subject to focus on. Your poetic form is smooth and there is a happy feel to your words. Congrats on winning the contest.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, Elaine -- always good to hear from you over here! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a beautiful poem and a beautiful painting of butterfly. Yes. You manage well to write a poem without the letter A. You flex your wings of imagination without any inhibition.
Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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What a beautiful poem and a beautiful painting of butterfly. Yes. You manage well to write a poem without the letter A. You flex your wings of imagination without any inhibition.
Well done.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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LoL -- I do love a challenge, Lisa!! ;) Thanx for your review on this one - take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from donette1914
wow incredible!! that took some time to make this and it shows
very interesting piece
very heartfelt
simply outstanding
very well written as your words flow so smoothly
very believable as it draws reader's in
nice photo to compliment your work
thank you for sharing it was pleasure
I hope for the best in the contest
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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wow incredible!! that took some time to make this and it shows
very interesting piece
very heartfelt
simply outstanding
very well written as your words flow so smoothly
very believable as it draws reader's in
nice photo to compliment your work
thank you for sharing it was pleasure
I hope for the best in the contest
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your encouraging review - so glad you enjoyed this fun little bit of silliness (twas a bit of a challenge)!! Have a wonderful week!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Life Without The Letter A writing prompt.
Your verse 'bout songs of butterflies is well done and fun.
Good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Life Without The Letter A writing prompt.
Your verse 'bout songs of butterflies is well done and fun.
Good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your review - so glad you enjoyed this one (twas a bit of a challenge)!! Have a wonderful week!
Comment from Mia Twysted
It was as if I was floating down a stream. I hadn't a care in the world. Around me was every beauty Earth had to behold. And flying about me were the most delicate and beautiful creatures created.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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It was as if I was floating down a stream. I hadn't a care in the world. Around me was every beauty Earth had to behold. And flying about me were the most delicate and beautiful creatures created.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Oh my goodness, Mia - what a lovely review! Thank you for sharing your 'escape' framed in those wonderful stars! You know, I have to admit it really was a fun challenge. Please be sure to enjoy your week ahead!
Comment from palmart
Great!! It is sometime difficult to find so many words without "A"s, but you did! Very clever to use the contraction of words that have "A" with the apostrophe! Good wording that fulfilled requirement and also good rhyme.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Great!! It is sometime difficult to find so many words without "A"s, but you did! Very clever to use the contraction of words that have "A" with the apostrophe! Good wording that fulfilled requirement and also good rhyme.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your review - so glad you enjoyed this one (twas a bit of a challenge)!! Have a wonderful week!
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You`re very welcome! Hope you to have good luck in the contest!!
