Comment from Cindy Decker

Excellent

Ronnie, I like your wry, humorous poem. I love the elephant photo, though your poem could stand alone.
Good luck in your contest, and all your writing.
Best wishes,
Cindy

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020

HELLO CINDY: Again...I thank you for your kind review. As usual...you are appreciated. You are one of my favorite readers. You understand me. You understand my poems. That makes me happy. That encourages me to do better and better each time. I thank you, Cindy. Thank you for being my friend. God bless you, kind lady. Cordially: rhonnie69.

reply by Cindy Decker on 20-Sep-2020

Ronnie, you really shine as a writer. Your literary star brightens everyday. I love your wry, humorous, and touching poems. Keep writing, Ronnie.
Your friend always,
Cindy

Comment from Lucy de Welles

Good

Lovely photo! I see the point you are trying to make here. However, you contradict your point in the explanation. "Having the mind of an elephant," is one of the most used expressions for a reason. They are one of the smartest animals on earth. You probably don't want to argue that they will forget anything. Especially kind promises. Forgetfulness, is NOT what an elephant is known for.
You might try to present your argument from a different direction :) to prove your point.
Good luck!
Lucy

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2020

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

Not so subtle satire here! There are lies, damn lies and politics!
Never more beautifully illustrated than by the latest wholesale hypocrisy about filling the vacancy on the Supreme Court.

Clever piece. Go vote!

Steve

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2020