Why the Traffic Stop?
Inspired by true events.15 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello,
Excellent entry for the 100 Word Dash Contest.
Congratulations! It's a different way to propose. I never heard of another. Well done. :)
Gypsy
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Hello,
Excellent entry for the 100 Word Dash Contest.
Congratulations! It's a different way to propose. I never heard of another. Well done. :)
Gypsy
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you kindly.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Quite an unexpected turn of a police chasing and ending with a marriage proposal. ""I can let you off with a warning," the officer said, grinning slylyslyly, "if you accept his proposal."
He pointed. Annie turned and gasped.
Jason was holding out a ring."Congrats for winning the first place in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Quite an unexpected turn of a police chasing and ending with a marriage proposal. ""I can let you off with a warning," the officer said, grinning slylyslyly, "if you accept his proposal."
He pointed. Annie turned and gasped.
Jason was holding out a ring."Congrats for winning the first place in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much. It was a surprising, come-from-behind victory.
Comment from To Write Is To Live
Very clever set-up. Didn't see the surprise ending coming! Good luck in the contest, I believe you have a very good chance at winning!
Thank you for writing and sharing, "Why the Traffic Stop?"
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Very clever set-up. Didn't see the surprise ending coming! Good luck in the contest, I believe you have a very good chance at winning!
Thank you for writing and sharing, "Why the Traffic Stop?"
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your support.
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-hundred-word flash fiction story, Why the Traffic Stop?, has the proper word count and tells a cool story of a proposal set up. Fun story.
I found this: ...grinning slylyslyly
Happy day.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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This one-hundred-word flash fiction story, Why the Traffic Stop?, has the proper word count and tells a cool story of a proposal set up. Fun story.
I found this: ...grinning slylyslyly
Happy day.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this is a fun story and you entertained me and I liked the sweet nature of this write, a shocking moment turned into a fine one, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Ha ha ha, this is a fun story and you entertained me and I liked the sweet nature of this write, a shocking moment turned into a fine one, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Thank you for reading.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 100 Word Dash writing prompt.
This short piece tells a clear story with a surprise ending.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 100 Word Dash writing prompt.
This short piece tells a clear story with a surprise ending.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Thank you. Yes, sometimes, the simple things are the best.
Comment from writer723
This is a very interesting and surprising story. I didn't see the end coming. What an unexpected twist! I can imagine this would be a nice way to propose to someone. Although the woman might be a little shaken up by having to deal with the potential ticket scenario. I enjoyed this cool proposal tale.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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This is a very interesting and surprising story. I didn't see the end coming. What an unexpected twist! I can imagine this would be a nice way to propose to someone. Although the woman might be a little shaken up by having to deal with the potential ticket scenario. I enjoyed this cool proposal tale.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your support.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is great how it plays with the reader's imagination. There is a bit of suspense, and yet the boyfriend isn't worried. This is an even greater mystery. You had a lot happen in 100 words. Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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This is great how it plays with the reader's imagination. There is a bit of suspense, and yet the boyfriend isn't worried. This is an even greater mystery. You had a lot happen in 100 words. Well done.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Thank you for reading.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written hundred-word flash fiction. That is quite a memorable proposal that neither of them will ever forget abd it is an interesting story to tell you he grandkids some day
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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A very well-written hundred-word flash fiction. That is quite a memorable proposal that neither of them will ever forget abd it is an interesting story to tell you he grandkids some day
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Thank you for reading.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Ha! Now this is a pleasant surprise, and I mean the story itself. Very imaginative flash fiction, and flawless, though I have to admit, I was so drawn in, I might have missed something. (*wink*)
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Ha! Now this is a pleasant surprise, and I mean the story itself. Very imaginative flash fiction, and flawless, though I have to admit, I was so drawn in, I might have missed something. (*wink*)
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Thank you for reading.
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My pleasure.
