Finally...
Relief is in the air!33 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent minute poem for the contest with wonderful imagery
and very good rhymes and syllables,
plus a theme that will appeal to everyone on fanstory.
One of the few entries I read with excellent iambic meter.
Autumn is my favorite season, unfortunately, it's follow by winter. :)
Excellent minute poem!
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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This is an excellent minute poem for the contest with wonderful imagery
and very good rhymes and syllables,
plus a theme that will appeal to everyone on fanstory.
One of the few entries I read with excellent iambic meter.
Autumn is my favorite season, unfortunately, it's follow by winter. :)
Excellent minute poem!
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much for your thoughtful and detailed review on this one, Robert -- those comments and stars truly mean a lot coming from you! :) Even though they are a challenge, I always enjoy this Minute form... Thanx for the good wishes and have a wonderful weekend out there!
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I love fall but also your poem perfectly describes my feeling about fall.
It captures by your great descriptions is how fall now cools as us off and the heat of summer is finally behind us.
Good Luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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I love fall but also your poem perfectly describes my feeling about fall.
It captures by your great descriptions is how fall now cools as us off and the heat of summer is finally behind us.
Good Luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from trimple
Good afternoon.
Oh, what a lovely little poem this is.
You start with this line--
A touch of Autumn brushed my cheek--how could anyone read that first line and not be captivated at once!
You describe here in you 'Minute poem' how the start of autumn begings to quell the flame of summer and continue towards the end to say --
Now sweet salvation's cooling kiss-- :)
A fine poem, Yvette.
kind regards
tracey
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Good afternoon.
Oh, what a lovely little poem this is.
You start with this line--
A touch of Autumn brushed my cheek--how could anyone read that first line and not be captivated at once!
You describe here in you 'Minute poem' how the start of autumn begings to quell the flame of summer and continue towards the end to say --
Now sweet salvation's cooling kiss-- :)
A fine poem, Yvette.
kind regards
tracey
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much for your thoughtful and detailed review on this one, Tracey -- these Minutes are always a bit of a challenge!! ;) Take care and have a wonderful weekend out there! ;)
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you too :)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and
presentation.
-You wrote a good minute
poem that meets all requirements.
-I like the progression of thoughts
as autumn begins, the dog days of
summer have passed, followed by
a good concluding verse.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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-Very nice image and
presentation.
-You wrote a good minute
poem that meets all requirements.
-I like the progression of thoughts
as autumn begins, the dog days of
summer have passed, followed by
a good concluding verse.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much!
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Sugarray77
A lovely an appropriate Minute poem, Yvette!! I enjoyed the seasonal references and got the vast appreciation for cooler days after summertime. Also, maybe these cool breezes will push these hurricanes away from our shores!! Great job with the meter and rhyme choices!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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A lovely an appropriate Minute poem, Yvette!! I enjoyed the seasonal references and got the vast appreciation for cooler days after summertime. Also, maybe these cool breezes will push these hurricanes away from our shores!! Great job with the meter and rhyme choices!!
Melissa
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Fingers crossed for the rest of the hurri-season, yeah? :) ;) Thanx so much for your review on this one, Melissa -- good to see that smiling face again!! ;) Take care and have a wonderful weekend! ;)
Comment from Debra Franze
Great poem. I can relate to. Living in Arizona with temp yesterday at 110 degrees. I can't wait for fall. Thank you for the well written poem.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Great poem. I can relate to. Living in Arizona with temp yesterday at 110 degrees. I can't wait for fall. Thank you for the well written poem.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from royowen
What a lovely poem, you've succeeded in acing this minute poem, I know that poetry is all about language, not about form, and yours is beautifully worded and with that power the language brings, congratulations, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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What a lovely poem, you've succeeded in acing this minute poem, I know that poetry is all about language, not about form, and yours is beautifully worded and with that power the language brings, congratulations, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Lovely and elegant seasonal imagery--autumn's touch brushed cheeks--cool mystique--droll malaise--A fine entry for the contest. Good luck. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Lovely and elegant seasonal imagery--autumn's touch brushed cheeks--cool mystique--droll malaise--A fine entry for the contest. Good luck. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This minute poem speaks about relief from heat of the summer with relief in the air welcoming cold by degrees; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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This minute poem speaks about relief from heat of the summer with relief in the air welcoming cold by degrees; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An ambient Autumnal write and you brought the scenes here in your fine minute. Line three is not iambic though and would need to be adjusted for the contest, perhaps "to quell the flames" would work better, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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An ambient Autumnal write and you brought the scenes here in your fine minute. Line three is not iambic though and would need to be adjusted for the contest, perhaps "to quell the flames" would work better, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for the catch here, Dolly. The error in meter has been corrected. 8-)
