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Relief is in the air!33 total reviews
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the photo you use with your poem,they are a perfect match Summer has did its last run the cold winter is yet to come , get ready
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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I love the photo you use with your poem,they are a perfect match Summer has did its last run the cold winter is yet to come , get ready
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Thank you so very much, Cookie!
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Your very welcome
Cookie
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Yur very wecome
Cookie
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your skillfully-written, delightful minute poem definitely reveals the mindset of an autumn lover. I too love fall--especially mid-season. The artwork is perfect.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Your skillfully-written, delightful minute poem definitely reveals the mindset of an autumn lover. I too love fall--especially mid-season. The artwork is perfect.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Thank you so very much, Janice!
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
No, no, no! Though I love fall, I am not ready!! hahaha Noooooo, not yet, please! Let's don't hurry things along...
BUT - this piece IS gorgeous. Your format is just right, all syllables counts and other requirements are perfectly met.
Beyond that, the image AND the font/background colors work to make this into a true thing of beauty. (Wish I could do this!)
I like it a LOT - so far you're my fav. Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Dear Mystery Writer,
No, no, no! Though I love fall, I am not ready!! hahaha Noooooo, not yet, please! Let's don't hurry things along...
BUT - this piece IS gorgeous. Your format is just right, all syllables counts and other requirements are perfectly met.
Beyond that, the image AND the font/background colors work to make this into a true thing of beauty. (Wish I could do this!)
I like it a LOT - so far you're my fav. Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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yeah, gotta say, I wasn't really ready either, but HERE it is: Fall!! ;) The weather changed on a dime almost and inspired this... gotta say, I am glad to bid summer 2020 good bye (and maybe even good riddance!). Thanks for the wonderful review!!
Comment from Joan E.
Your poem is so appropriate as we cope with the calamitous wild fires. We saw the sun yesterday for the first time since flames started. I admired the rhymes and description of a waning summer and its "chains". Best wishes in the Minute Poem contest. Here's to autumn- Joan
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Your poem is so appropriate as we cope with the calamitous wild fires. We saw the sun yesterday for the first time since flames started. I admired the rhymes and description of a waning summer and its "chains". Best wishes in the Minute Poem contest. Here's to autumn- Joan
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Wow... you just put a bright spark in the 'overcast' day here, Joan: THANK YOU for such a wonderful review and those lovely stars!! So glad to hear the sun's returned there.... Here's sending a smile right back atcha!!
Comment from Cindy Decker
Yvette, I like your unique view of summer. Though there are some who will agree with you.
Fall is my favorite time of year, cool, and colorful. It's what comes after fall that I loathe the most. If it were not for Christmas, snow-climate. people like me would have colonized elsewhere.
Excellent work, Yvette. A beautiful point well-made.
Good luck with all your writing,
Cindy
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Yvette, I like your unique view of summer. Though there are some who will agree with you.
Fall is my favorite time of year, cool, and colorful. It's what comes after fall that I loathe the most. If it were not for Christmas, snow-climate. people like me would have colonized elsewhere.
Excellent work, Yvette. A beautiful point well-made.
Good luck with all your writing,
Cindy
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much, Cindy, for your awesome review on this Minute! Have a great remainder of the weekend!
Comment from equestrik
Your writing here has very pleasing cadence and rhythm as well as speaking of the many ways Autumn can provide relief from the summer heat. Beautiful fall picture.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Your writing here has very pleasing cadence and rhythm as well as speaking of the many ways Autumn can provide relief from the summer heat. Beautiful fall picture.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much!! 8-)
Comment from WriterHeather
Yes! Autumn is my favorite holiday! Perfect temps, beautiful colors, Halloween. I've never been a big summer person myself. This is beautifully written and just rolls off the tounge.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Yes! Autumn is my favorite holiday! Perfect temps, beautiful colors, Halloween. I've never been a big summer person myself. This is beautifully written and just rolls off the tounge.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Wow - such an awesome review and those stars are just wonderful!! So glad to find another fan of the Autumn weather -- lovely smile there, my lady, and great pumpkins!! Thanx for stopping in this evening and be sure to drop by again after the contest!
Comment from Dawn Munro
I love the minute form, and you have used it beautifully -- 'as summer wanes, a touch of autumn brushed your cheek' sets the mood wonderfully, and then the idea of the mystery of the season... *Sigh* Magic!
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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I love the minute form, and you have used it beautifully -- 'as summer wanes, a touch of autumn brushed your cheek' sets the mood wonderfully, and then the idea of the mystery of the season... *Sigh* Magic!
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much for your thoughtful and detailed review on this one, Dawn -- those comments and stars truly mean a lot! :) Even though they are a challenge, I, too, always enjoy this Minute form... Take care and have a wonderful weekend up there!
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It was my pleasure!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written minute poem about Autumn that finally arrived after a hot summer season. It is my favourite season as well as Spring when the temperature is not too hot or too cold.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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A very well-written minute poem about Autumn that finally arrived after a hot summer season. It is my favourite season as well as Spring when the temperature is not too hot or too cold.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from Loren .
Well penned and timely as the summer heat is still fresh upon our skin as surely as a pricking nettle. This poem reminds me too of the coming winter when we look back to recall the glowing embers of fall that kept us mellow. Loren
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Well penned and timely as the summer heat is still fresh upon our skin as surely as a pricking nettle. This poem reminds me too of the coming winter when we look back to recall the glowing embers of fall that kept us mellow. Loren
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much!!
