Finally...
Relief is in the air!33 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
All the lines are perfect and are aligned. It is clear and concise. I can understand it. Exceptional work! No grammatical errors. Congratulations on winning the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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All the lines are perfect and are aligned. It is clear and concise. I can understand it. Exceptional work! No grammatical errors. Congratulations on winning the contest!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thanx so very much for the review here, Raul -- it's always so good to hear from you over here! ;) The congrats are so appreciated... kindof like a little bit of sunshine to start the week! ;) Take care and have a Marvelous Monday!! ;) Yvette
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You're welcome and thank you!
Comment from Boogienights
I love this! I'm a fan of cooler weather, so this poem resonates with me. I really hate winter though, I wish autumn could last forever. Congratulations on winning the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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I love this! I'm a fan of cooler weather, so this poem resonates with me. I really hate winter though, I wish autumn could last forever. Congratulations on winning the contest.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thanx so very much for the review here, my lady -- always so good to hear from you over here! ;) The congrats are so appreciated... little bit of sunshine to start the week! ;) Take care and have a Marvelous Monday!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Minute Poetry writing prompt.
This colorful verse describes fall in a lovely way.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Minute Poetry writing prompt.
This colorful verse describes fall in a lovely way.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from Bill Schott
This minute poem, Finally, has the proper formatting and shows the constant change in our attitudes as one relieving season trumps th3 once t@uted one which has exhausted$ its charm.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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This minute poem, Finally, has the proper formatting and shows the constant change in our attitudes as one relieving season trumps th3 once t@uted one which has exhausted$ its charm.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is an interesting concept. Readers could debate this concept. Your poem could get others fired up aboth the message here. Some will agree that cool is better and much a relief. Others, I included, living in Vermont, do not look forward to the cold. Most of us have already turned our heat on, the nights are so cold. This is amgood topic.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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This is an interesting concept. Readers could debate this concept. Your poem could get others fired up aboth the message here. Some will agree that cool is better and much a relief. Others, I included, living in Vermont, do not look forward to the cold. Most of us have already turned our heat on, the nights are so cold. This is amgood topic.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Lol! Yes, you may be right... we can finally open our windows at night! Thank you so much!
Comment from lyenochka
Beautifully written minute with great meter! And yes, there's is great relief from the summer's "strain" (for those who actually have a summer season) to feel the cool of autumn. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Beautifully written minute with great meter! And yes, there's is great relief from the summer's "strain" (for those who actually have a summer season) to feel the cool of autumn. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an interesting poem that I enjoyed. Most folks do begin to look toward the end of a hot summer. Well written. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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This is an interesting poem that I enjoyed. Most folks do begin to look toward the end of a hot summer. Well written. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much!!
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You're quite welcome.
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello,
I love the imagery you used to reflect your poem's message. The colors of the tree is awesome. This is a great minute poem with all it's requirements which you met. Once summer is fading away, the cool of falls makes the air a little fresher, like you said "a cool kiss." Nicely written with very creative words to describe the two seasons. Great rhyming of your end words. Happy future writing:-)
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Hello,
I love the imagery you used to reflect your poem's message. The colors of the tree is awesome. This is a great minute poem with all it's requirements which you met. Once summer is fading away, the cool of falls makes the air a little fresher, like you said "a cool kiss." Nicely written with very creative words to describe the two seasons. Great rhyming of your end words. Happy future writing:-)
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Wow, Joyce, you've brought a big ol' smile over here! Thanx so much for both the review and those shining stars... I am SOOOO ready for the Fall weather to add a bit of cooling to our evenings, aren't you? ;) Take care out there!
Comment from palmart
Good poetry! Nature deserves it! End of Summer`s running and Autumn starts its crawling, in a never ending cycle! Good wording and great poetry! Nice image chosen!
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Good poetry! Nature deserves it! End of Summer`s running and Autumn starts its crawling, in a never ending cycle! Good wording and great poetry! Nice image chosen!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much, palmart, for your awesome review on this Minute! Have a great remainder of the weekend!
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Thank you Author!! My pleasure! You too have a great remainder of this weekend!!
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer!
What a marvelous Minute poem!
I so love summer, and yet, I've already purchased pumpkins, gourds, and enough chrysanthemums to start my own garden center!
Rhyme and meter is "spot on!"
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes,
diane
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Hello Mystery Writer!
What a marvelous Minute poem!
I so love summer, and yet, I've already purchased pumpkins, gourds, and enough chrysanthemums to start my own garden center!
Rhyme and meter is "spot on!"
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes,
diane
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Wow! What an awesome review, Beautiful Lady! :) Thanx so much for both the review and those shining stars... I am SOOOO ready for the Fall weather to add a bit of cooling to our evenings: looks like it took a hurricane passing to spur that on (but I'll take it any way I can get it!).... Take care up there! ;)
