Comment from To Write Is To Live

Excellent

As a coffee lover and lover of western stories and lore, your story combining both is a sure draw for me! Cowboys in Brazil? Gauchos on the pampas of Argentina? And where does Annie Oakley and the single coffee bean come in?
Looking forward to the next installment!
Blessings to you, and have a great weekend!

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020

Yeah I'm going to finish that today after I have a cup of coffee
I'm have asleep!
Thanks,
Ricky

Comment from robyn corum

Good

Ricky,

So, is this completed? How is the reader supposed to know for sure?

This was a strange and unusual little piece. I wasn't sure how all the different parts fit together, to be honest.
--> fairy tales
--> a coffee bean in Brazil
--> Annie Oakley?

What is the common theme that ties all this together? Or will that be coming later?

Did you know you can save a post in 'preview' mode until you completely finish it and get it exactly like you want it? That might be an option so that you can continue to work on a piece and not let readers see it early?

Thanks!

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020

I ain't going to work on that a little bit later check out my one I just posted you'll like it entitled,
"The Old Man"
Ricky