Listen
Can you hear it?19 total reviews
Comment from Kingsrookviii
Excellent poem, here. This entire package is spot on, perfect. At first I though I would have used but instead of yet; however, your usage fits nicely and with just the slightest of changes in what is being conveyed. I love language and the subtle nuances. You've done well.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Excellent poem, here. This entire package is spot on, perfect. At first I though I would have used but instead of yet; however, your usage fits nicely and with just the slightest of changes in what is being conveyed. I love language and the subtle nuances. You've done well.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Oh my goodness - what a wonderful review and those shiny stars are a perfect cap on a very long day!! Thank you for stopping in today and for such lovely comments - may you have a fantastic evening in your corner of the world!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork
and presentation.
-Good syllable count,
topic, and effective use
of one continuous thought.
-I like the message in your
poem about the importance
of "open hearts" in times
of great discord.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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-Very nice artwork
and presentation.
-Good syllable count,
topic, and effective use
of one continuous thought.
-I like the message in your
poem about the importance
of "open hearts" in times
of great discord.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for your great comments.
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You are quite welcome.
Comment from royowen
A lovely tectractys, poem, you've done a wonderful job with this and so relevant to our modern day circumstance, this pandemic has really rattled out collective cage, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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A lovely tectractys, poem, you've done a wonderful job with this and so relevant to our modern day circumstance, this pandemic has really rattled out collective cage, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thanks for your great comments.
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Most welcome
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Listen" is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill, this talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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"Listen" is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill, this talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Dear Anon,
You're very welcome.
God bless, take care and keep safe!
the Duchess
Comment from IndefinitelySmallx
Beautiful! Wonderful poem and wonderful graphic. I love the format of this type of poem and it has been excellently executed! Good luck with your contest and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Beautiful! Wonderful poem and wonderful graphic. I love the format of this type of poem and it has been excellently executed! Good luck with your contest and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Many thanks for your great comments!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your creatively composed poem uses well-chosen words to speak of love and those who allow it to come in--using personification to convey the power of love.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Your creatively composed poem uses well-chosen words to speak of love and those who allow it to come in--using personification to convey the power of love.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your great comments!
Comment from equestrik
This is a lovely poem and you have chosen a bright and cheerful painting to go with it. Love, it really is what everything comes back to. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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This is a lovely poem and you have chosen a bright and cheerful painting to go with it. Love, it really is what everything comes back to. Nicely done.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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Many thanks for your great comments!
Comment from oliver818
I like this poem, and enjoyed reading it. I particularly enjoyed the imagery you used and the last line is very powerful. A discordant din is a lovely way of describing life. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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I like this poem, and enjoyed reading it. I particularly enjoyed the imagery you used and the last line is very powerful. A discordant din is a lovely way of describing life. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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Many thanks for your great comments!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Startling and elegant--powerful finale--unburdened by discordant din earns your stars in itself for its imagery and alliteration. Good luck. Cheers. LIZ
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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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Startling and elegant--powerful finale--unburdened by discordant din earns your stars in itself for its imagery and alliteration. Good luck. Cheers. LIZ
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Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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Many thanks for your great comments!
