Windows of the Soul
When we lose sight of each other.14 total reviews
Comment from L. Kalere
Your poem is truly beautiful. "I've become invisible-a pane in your way". There are many of us who can identify with these words. I loved every word. Congratulations.
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Your poem is truly beautiful. "I've become invisible-a pane in your way". There are many of us who can identify with these words. I loved every word. Congratulations.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous,
An excellent entry for the Sad Poems writing prompt contest. You followed the rules of the contest well.
Love affair break-up is very painful.
Good luck in the contest.
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Hello anonymous,
An excellent entry for the Sad Poems writing prompt contest. You followed the rules of the contest well.
Love affair break-up is very painful.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
Comment from Annie Rose1
It tells a story of Sorrow to me, of a world that's fallen apart, a couple, who nolonger see each other as they used to, I'm hoping that what your portraying in this piece. I liked it very much, and I don't usually understand poetry, so very good indeed.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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It tells a story of Sorrow to me, of a world that's fallen apart, a couple, who nolonger see each other as they used to, I'm hoping that what your portraying in this piece. I liked it very much, and I don't usually understand poetry, so very good indeed.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much. I'm pleased this poem's meaning was accessible to you. I know what you mean - a lot of poetry is not very straightforward to understand.
Comment from Annie Rose1
It tells a story of Sorrow to me, of a world that's fallen apart, a couple, who nolonger see each other as they used to, I'm hoping that what your portraying in this piece. I liked it very much, and I don't usually understand poetry, so very good indeed.
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It tells a story of Sorrow to me, of a world that's fallen apart, a couple, who nolonger see each other as they used to, I'm hoping that what your portraying in this piece. I liked it very much, and I don't usually understand poetry, so very good indeed.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Windows of the Soul, finds the coming of understanding between two people who are no longer looking for the same things in life.
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This poem, Windows of the Soul, finds the coming of understanding between two people who are no longer looking for the same things in life.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Sad Poems contest. Losing a relationship is heart breaking. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!
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This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Sad Poems contest. Losing a relationship is heart breaking. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
Comment from palmart
When two persons has a common project in life and, unfortunately, one "leaves" this World, the one that remains on this side, feel not only sadness but impotence to communicate, among other also-important feelings. Your poetry reflects that lack of communication that disconnects parts, making it hard to face. Limitations are covered by different other feelings, which help to go on...
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When two persons has a common project in life and, unfortunately, one "leaves" this World, the one that remains on this side, feel not only sadness but impotence to communicate, among other also-important feelings. Your poetry reflects that lack of communication that disconnects parts, making it hard to face. Limitations are covered by different other feelings, which help to go on...
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
Comment from zanya
Yes an interesting reflection on love as it begins to ebb away 'a pane in your way'- a difficult moment to capture and portray -the final two lines are especially effective
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Yes an interesting reflection on love as it begins to ebb away 'a pane in your way'- a difficult moment to capture and portray -the final two lines are especially effective
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
Comment from equestrik
I really like the picture you chose here. Your writing is powerful and very sad. It is a good entry for the contest. I love your references to the eyes-blinking, looking etc. especially the first line, "Who will blink first?"
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I really like the picture you chose here. Your writing is powerful and very sad. It is a good entry for the contest. I love your references to the eyes-blinking, looking etc. especially the first line, "Who will blink first?"
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the sadness when a couple seem to live each other dearly but when they are together they seem to be miserable and cannot have a good time together.
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A very well-written poem about the sadness when a couple seem to live each other dearly but when they are together they seem to be miserable and cannot have a good time together.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
