Forsaken
The path almost taken...16 total reviews
Comment from Ezer
Poems that rhyme and carry a rhythm are such a joy. This flows as easily as a song and the message hits as hard a bass drum. The genuine nature of the experience comes through clearly and engages. Great piece.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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Poems that rhyme and carry a rhythm are such a joy. This flows as easily as a song and the message hits as hard a bass drum. The genuine nature of the experience comes through clearly and engages. Great piece.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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Thank you so very much for this lovely review. I'm so happy that you enjoyed and its read achieved a clear and engaging experience. Thank you once again!
Comment from Debra Franze
Great and beautiful poem of hope. Well deserving win. Well written straight from the heart. Thank you for sharing, you should see about other ways to share this hopeful poem. There are many in need that if read this poem could have hope. Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Great and beautiful poem of hope. Well deserving win. Well written straight from the heart. Thank you for sharing, you should see about other ways to share this hopeful poem. There are many in need that if read this poem could have hope. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Thank you so very much for the wonderful review and especially for the encouragement to find other ways to share my poem. I greatly appreciate your feedback and am so happy that you enjoyed! Have a beautiful day!
Comment from lyenochka
Great testimonial poem! Hope isn't really hope if everything is rosy. You described a time desperation and how ab encounter with God and His compassion made life all so worth it. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Great testimonial poem! Hope isn't really hope if everything is rosy. You described a time desperation and how ab encounter with God and His compassion made life all so worth it. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for reading my piece and for the wonderful review! I'm so happy that you enjoyed!
Comment from palmart
What a message! I found it very real as per the feelings described from inside. Good and different "touch" in creativity by starting and ending with the same sentence, differentiated in italics. Picture depicts a question like : Why me?, That expects an explanation which helps to move person outside of that "abyss".
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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What a message! I found it very real as per the feelings described from inside. Good and different "touch" in creativity by starting and ending with the same sentence, differentiated in italics. Picture depicts a question like : Why me?, That expects an explanation which helps to move person outside of that "abyss".
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the lovely comments and appreciation of the duplicated beginning and ending of my poem. I had done this on an older piece of my writing and thought it would be an effective part of my poem on "Forsaken." I am so happy that you enjoyed this piece and want to thank you again for the wonderful review!
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You`re very welcome! I see that first one is like incongruent with the situation, but as you continue reading, sense is building up. Last one, closes and round the subject nicely. Great idea!
Hope you the Best in coming contests!
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Thank you once again and have a lovely evening!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Excellent entry for the poem of hope writing prompt contest. You wrote a poem about hope in your own unique way.
It reminded me of an AA prayer.... "God, grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change,
courage to change the things I can,
and wisdom to know the difference."
Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Hello anonymous
Excellent entry for the poem of hope writing prompt contest. You wrote a poem about hope in your own unique way.
It reminded me of an AA prayer.... "God, grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change,
courage to change the things I can,
and wisdom to know the difference."
Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you so very much for the lovely review! I'm so happy that you enjoyed!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the poem of hope contest. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the poem of hope contest. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much! I'm so happy you enjoyed my poem on "Forsaken!" Have a lovely day!
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You're very welcome!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about finding hope when we choose to leave the path we find comfortable with and vow to renew our path away from sin to discover there is hope we didn't had before.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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A very well-written poem about finding hope when we choose to leave the path we find comfortable with and vow to renew our path away from sin to discover there is hope we didn't had before.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for taking time to review my poem. I'm so happy that you enjoyed. Have a beautiful day!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wow! This is such a wonderful write, so well rhymed with a perfect flow and your words are heavenly and faithful and I just enjoyed every word, a magical journey here in belief and ultimately peace, much enjoyed and a well deserved six, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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Wow! This is such a wonderful write, so well rhymed with a perfect flow and your words are heavenly and faithful and I just enjoyed every word, a magical journey here in belief and ultimately peace, much enjoyed and a well deserved six, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much, dear Dolly, for this beautiful review. I had originally started this a few weeks ago for another writing prompt, but got side-tracked and missed the deadline. Your words of so kindly appreciated! Thank you once again!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a beautiful, creative, vividly descriptive piece about the most important experience one will ever have--meeting the Lord and getting saved. Yes, we believers still face challenges, hurts, etc., but we have Him to turn to.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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This is a beautiful, creative, vividly descriptive piece about the most important experience one will ever have--meeting the Lord and getting saved. Yes, we believers still face challenges, hurts, etc., but we have Him to turn to.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for this lovely review... it is deeply appreciated. I'm so happy that you enjoyed! Have a wonderful day!
Comment from royowen
I would hope that the author had found the one and only way out of this godforsaken realm of lostness. I can't commend you enough for this very stylish and articulate work, beautifully written, it is a credit to you, and although there was sadness woven your poem, there was also great hope, great ballad, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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I would hope that the author had found the one and only way out of this godforsaken realm of lostness. I can't commend you enough for this very stylish and articulate work, beautifully written, it is a credit to you, and although there was sadness woven your poem, there was also great hope, great ballad, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for the lovely review. I appreciate all the kind words you have spoken on my work. Have a wonderful evening!
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Well done
