In Harmony
Minute Poetry contest entry8 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Your literary technique of personification draws the reader in to project the meaning they think this poem will form. I wrote a similar poem about my guitar. It was not as elegant as this one though. Well expressed.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Your literary technique of personification draws the reader in to project the meaning they think this poem will form. I wrote a similar poem about my guitar. It was not as elegant as this one though. Well expressed.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Yes, I really love playing my guitar. I had to give the minute poem form a try to express this. Thank you for the great review and kind comments. I'm glad you liked this piece.
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Ron
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer,
What an exceptional Minute poem!
Love the subject matter and the ease with which you describe your "sweet guitar."
Wonderful visual and emotive imagery.
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Hello Mystery Writer,
What an exceptional Minute poem!
Love the subject matter and the ease with which you describe your "sweet guitar."
Wonderful visual and emotive imagery.
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review, Diane. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and kind comments. Yes, I do love my guitar. I hope you have a great day and thank you again.
Ron
Comment from equestrik
This write is incredibly beautiful and speaks to one who knows all too well the friendship of a guitar. Mine was a 12 string. My best friend for many years. Beautiful.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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This write is incredibly beautiful and speaks to one who knows all too well the friendship of a guitar. Mine was a 12 string. My best friend for many years. Beautiful.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Equestrik. I've never had the chance to experience the beauty of a 12 string before. My dad had one when I was a kid but I wasn't into music then. I really appreciate the the gracious stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Thanks again.
Ron
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, the peace we find when it's just the two of us, yeah?! A great employment of the minute form here -- thanx so much for sharing and best of luck! ;)
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Oh, the peace we find when it's just the two of us, yeah?! A great employment of the minute form here -- thanx so much for sharing and best of luck! ;)
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Hey, Yvette, hello. Thank you for the awesome review. Yes, anytime I'm down I can turn to my guitar and get in a better mood. As always, I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked my little minute poem. Have yourself a great day.
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Ron
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
Yours is the first I have read in the contest voting booth for Minute poems and it intrigued me very much. I wish I could play some musical instrument! To join with guitar or fiddle or piano to create something magical. Wow. Soooo stinking cool. *smile*
I loved your final lines, but would humbly suggest a small change to help with flow of thought:
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Yours currently:
How deeply loved and prized you are
My sweet guitar
This soul creates
Where refuge waits
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My suggestion:
How deeply loved and prized you are
My sweet guitar
Sweet refuge waits
Where soul creates
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Yes, you are entirely welcome to toss this idea straight into the TRASH. hahaha
Either way, thanks and good luck -- (still worth a five!)
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Dear Mystery Poet,
Yours is the first I have read in the contest voting booth for Minute poems and it intrigued me very much. I wish I could play some musical instrument! To join with guitar or fiddle or piano to create something magical. Wow. Soooo stinking cool. *smile*
I loved your final lines, but would humbly suggest a small change to help with flow of thought:
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Yours currently:
How deeply loved and prized you are
My sweet guitar
This soul creates
Where refuge waits
*
My suggestion:
How deeply loved and prized you are
My sweet guitar
Sweet refuge waits
Where soul creates
***
Yes, you are entirely welcome to toss this idea straight into the TRASH. hahaha
Either way, thanks and good luck -- (still worth a five!)
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Hey, Robyn, hello. Thank you so much for the fantastic review. Yes, there's nothing better than making beautiful music other than doing it with friends. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this little minute poem. Thank you again.
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Ron
Comment from pome lover
terrific!
a happy, poem to your guitar - what a breath of fresh air.
Makes me smile.
And I love that it's a "she."
This is really good. I was thinking of entering - and I may still, but I think you've got this one locked! Good going.
pome lover
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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terrific!
a happy, poem to your guitar - what a breath of fresh air.
Makes me smile.
And I love that it's a "she."
This is really good. I was thinking of entering - and I may still, but I think you've got this one locked! Good going.
pome lover
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Wow, thank you so much for the fantastic review and giant sixer, pome lover. Yeah, she's my baby. Lol. I dearly appreciate the gracious rating and kind comments. Yes, please jump in. I can't believe more people haven't entered. If so, best of luck to you. Thank you again.
Comment from Mimi Linny
This is a picture-perfect Minute poetry and one with lots of wonderful meaning and heart for the love of a beautiful, resounding instrument...your guitar... The rhyme and rhythm of your poem are exquisite and create an amazingly smooth flow to enhance the reading of the poem. Fantastically achieved... and wishing you much luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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This is a picture-perfect Minute poetry and one with lots of wonderful meaning and heart for the love of a beautiful, resounding instrument...your guitar... The rhyme and rhythm of your poem are exquisite and create an amazingly smooth flow to enhance the reading of the poem. Fantastically achieved... and wishing you much luck in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Wow, thank you so much for the gracious review and the giant sixer, Mimi. I dearly appreciate the generous stars and kind comments. Yes, I do love my guitar. I have a few actually. Lol. I'm glad you liked my little minute poem. I hope you have a wonderful day and thank you again.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a well formed Minute poem with fine rhyming and meter and I adored the sentiments about a precious guitar, the anticipation of music was created here too, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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This is a well formed Minute poem with fine rhyming and meter and I adored the sentiments about a precious guitar, the anticipation of music was created here too, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Dolly. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece.
