God's own hands
We are in the Lord's hands.7 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Excellent entry for the poem of hope writing prompt contest. You wrote a poem about hope in your own unique way.
The poem is about endurance, hope, and faith during our present situation. I agree to a point. We do have a racial problem in America.
Well done. Good luck in the contest.
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Hello anonymous
Excellent entry for the poem of hope writing prompt contest. You wrote a poem about hope in your own unique way.
The poem is about endurance, hope, and faith during our present situation. I agree to a point. We do have a racial problem in America.
Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Very nicely written. Beautiful flow to it and nice rhyming scheme. It isn't a matter of black or white it's a matter instead of wrong verses right. Americans are strong we will cone through. My favourite part as sure as old glory waves over this land. America will be saved by gods merciful hand. Well done.
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Very nicely written. Beautiful flow to it and nice rhyming scheme. It isn't a matter of black or white it's a matter instead of wrong verses right. Americans are strong we will cone through. My favourite part as sure as old glory waves over this land. America will be saved by gods merciful hand. Well done.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
Comment from Earl Corp
This is a great entry into the Poem of Hope contest. It rhymes, makes sense, is spiritual, and it affects the reader emotionally. You chose a great graphic to accompany your poem. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a great entry into the Poem of Hope contest. It rhymes, makes sense, is spiritual, and it affects the reader emotionally. You chose a great graphic to accompany your poem. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
Comment from AnnieDawn
I do so hope that God's hand does save this land because people are ruining it and I do not see any relief. Thank you for sharing in your poem. It is truly a poem of hope. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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I do so hope that God's hand does save this land because people are ruining it and I do not see any relief. Thank you for sharing in your poem. It is truly a poem of hope. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the poem of hope contest. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!
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This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the poem of hope contest. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
Comment from jaded831
Your poem speaks the truth. It isn't about black or white, it's about wrong or right. We need your poem because in all this craziness your poem gives hope. We are all Americans, one people under God.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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Your poem speaks the truth. It isn't about black or white, it's about wrong or right. We need your poem because in all this craziness your poem gives hope. We are all Americans, one people under God.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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Thank you, for the review and stars. Yes, these are indeed troubled times but as always we will overcome them, with God's help of course.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem that is so lovely and full of the truth. You used great descriptive words that go well with the art work. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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This is a very well written poem that is so lovely and full of the truth. You used great descriptive words that go well with the art work. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Thank you, for your review. I just have one question, in your written review you gave the poem high remarks then gave 4 stars. I'm not asking you to change the 4 stars, I'm just wondering, since you did not have any suggestions for improvement, why only 4 stars?
