What Have You Wrought?
You're shaping the future in ways you cannot imagine...35 total reviews
Comment from To Write Is To Live
An eloquent poem reminding us that our words do have power, great power to shape the beliefs and lives of young people that we teach, whether intentionally or unintentionally, as they hear what we have to say! May we always remember that the children are watching!
Thank you for writing and sharing, "What Have You Wrought?"
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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An eloquent poem reminding us that our words do have power, great power to shape the beliefs and lives of young people that we teach, whether intentionally or unintentionally, as they hear what we have to say! May we always remember that the children are watching!
Thank you for writing and sharing, "What Have You Wrought?"
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much for your encouraging and insightful review today!
Comment from Boogienights
This is a great entry for the contest, especially since it addresses the social unrest and violence going on our country today. This is a very well written poem and should do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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This is a great entry for the contest, especially since it addresses the social unrest and violence going on our country today. This is a very well written poem and should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much for your encouraging review, Boogie!
Comment from equestrik
This is such a creative and well written poem using the words; fire, ice, cold, and breath. I am so impressed with this. There is a lot of truth to your words here is well.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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This is such a creative and well written poem using the words; fire, ice, cold, and breath. I am so impressed with this. There is a lot of truth to your words here is well.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much for your encouraging review, ma'am!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I think you have a winner here, you went above and beyond the contest requirements by creating a fairy tale in disguise. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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I think you have a winner here, you went above and beyond the contest requirements by creating a fairy tale in disguise. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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Thank you so very much, Iza, for such a wonderful review and those stars are such a beautiful bonus!! Here's sending you some sunshine for you in your corner of the universe!!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Stunning imagery--nary an awkward phrase despite the constraints of the contests--lofty breath--discordant beats--startling paradox--even ice can burn ... cool deception. Fine work--this may be a winner! Cheers. LIZ
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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Stunning imagery--nary an awkward phrase despite the constraints of the contests--lofty breath--discordant beats--startling paradox--even ice can burn ... cool deception. Fine work--this may be a winner! Cheers. LIZ
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Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much for your encouraging review, Liz!
