What Have You Wrought?
You're shaping the future in ways you cannot imagine...35 total reviews
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This is a poem depicting the influence today's events could have on the naive young people observing. The destruction that it seems hundreds are getting away with, does bode for bad influence in the future.
The poem is very rythmic and the composition of excellently chosen words. I like the poem very much.
Ralf
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
  |
This is a poem depicting the influence today's events could have on the naive young people observing. The destruction that it seems hundreds are getting away with, does bode for bad influence in the future.
The poem is very rythmic and the composition of excellently chosen words. I like the poem very much.
Ralf
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
-
Thank you so much for your thoughtful and insightful review tonight.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Knowing when, how gradually/how fast, and how bluntly to tell young ones the truth is little like walking a tightrope. Your poem is vividly descriptive and skillfully written. It conveys a powerful message.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
|
Knowing when, how gradually/how fast, and how bluntly to tell young ones the truth is little like walking a tightrope. Your poem is vividly descriptive and skillfully written. It conveys a powerful message.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
-
Thank you so much for your thoughtful and insightful review, Janice.
Comment from dragonpoet
You used these words well to describe how lies can burn away hope and can cause a warm heart to maybe turn cold and bitter.
Good luck in the prompt
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
|
You used these words well to describe how lies can burn away hope and can cause a warm heart to maybe turn cold and bitter.
Good luck in the prompt
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
-
Thank you so much for your thoughtful and insightful review, dragonpoet.
-
You are most kindly welcome.
Joan
Comment from Janet Foor
You're shaping the future in ways you cannot imagine. -- I wish more people realized the message in this lovely poem.
You covered the challenge of the required words beautifully.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
|
You're shaping the future in ways you cannot imagine. -- I wish more people realized the message in this lovely poem.
You covered the challenge of the required words beautifully.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
-
Thank you so much for your thoughtful and insightful review, Janet.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
You're shaping the future in ways you cannot imagine...
What Have You Wrought?
Hello anonymous
Interesting entry for the Use These Words writing prompt contest. You included fire - cold - ice - breath in your poem, thank you for the darker font...it makes it easier to read. I think this poem is about the BLM peaceful demonstrations.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
|
You're shaping the future in ways you cannot imagine...
What Have You Wrought?
Hello anonymous
Interesting entry for the Use These Words writing prompt contest. You included fire - cold - ice - breath in your poem, thank you for the darker font...it makes it easier to read. I think this poem is about the BLM peaceful demonstrations.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
-
Thank you so much for your thoughtful and insightful review, Gypsy Blue.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a lovely poem and I really enjoyed reading it. Your placement of the required words is well thought out and it is an excellent contest entry. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
|
This is a lovely poem and I really enjoyed reading it. Your placement of the required words is well thought out and it is an excellent contest entry. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
-
Thank you so much for your thoughtful review, Patty.
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
I love the artwork you selected! It's the first thing a reader sees and sets up the reader to expect something that is going to be messy - splattered. And your poem is not messy at all, but the subject is very messy, and is therefore very appropriate!
You've done such an excellent job of hiding the required words that I didn't realize it was that type of poem until I read the notes. I really appreciate your message and agree with it. And your poem was excellent -
This is a really, really good question:
"'Tis said an angry heart grows cold,
But what of one lost in confusion?"
Thank you for writing something so clarifying about a confusing subject!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
|
I love the artwork you selected! It's the first thing a reader sees and sets up the reader to expect something that is going to be messy - splattered. And your poem is not messy at all, but the subject is very messy, and is therefore very appropriate!
You've done such an excellent job of hiding the required words that I didn't realize it was that type of poem until I read the notes. I really appreciate your message and agree with it. And your poem was excellent -
This is a really, really good question:
"'Tis said an angry heart grows cold,
But what of one lost in confusion?"
Thank you for writing something so clarifying about a confusing subject!
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
-
My pleasure, Susan, and thank you so much for your thoughtful and insightful review.
Comment from Cindy Warren
I don't know what this will do to the next generation. Certainly they are not learning anything good from all of this. I need to believe things will get better. We can not go on like this. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
|
I don't know what this will do to the next generation. Certainly they are not learning anything good from all of this. I need to believe things will get better. We can not go on like this. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
-
Thank you so much for your thoughtful and insightful review, Cindy.
Comment from Loren .
Okay, so this poem is revealing two things (at least) about you. One, you are a seeker of the truth and know the profound significance of living it. A quality I highly admire in people. And, two, your scientific mind ... yes, I saw how you sneaked in that piece about ice being able to burn. This is a very deep piece of writing, Yvette. I enjoyed the journey. Loren
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
 |
Okay, so this poem is revealing two things (at least) about you. One, you are a seeker of the truth and know the profound significance of living it. A quality I highly admire in people. And, two, your scientific mind ... yes, I saw how you sneaked in that piece about ice being able to burn. This is a very deep piece of writing, Yvette. I enjoyed the journey. Loren
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
-
Well, as I've said before: flattery will get you everywhere (wink, wink)... Oh, Loren you always know how to make a girl feel good about herself!! Thank you so very much for such a wonderful review and those stars are such a beautiful bonus, sir!! Here's sending you some sunshine for you over there in the Lone Star state today!!
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is clear and concise. Well written. Well done. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like your piece of poetry. Good luck!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
|
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is clear and concise. Well written. Well done. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like your piece of poetry. Good luck!
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
-
Thanks so much for your encouraging review today!
