What Have You Wrought?
You're shaping the future in ways you cannot imagine...35 total reviews
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I think as you've so eloquently stated, young minds an hearts can be influenced by what older folk have conditioned them with whether it be truth or not. When I was a young lad, I was alone a lot because I never followed the crowd. I would always aspire to follow what was right and true because truth is colorblind. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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I think as you've so eloquently stated, young minds an hearts can be influenced by what older folk have conditioned them with whether it be truth or not. When I was a young lad, I was alone a lot because I never followed the crowd. I would always aspire to follow what was right and true because truth is colorblind. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Seems the whole idea of being an independent thinker these days is so rare ... but I can't think of anything that we need more of, yeah? :) :) Thanx so much for your review on this one, Jeffrey -- it's always so good to hear from you over here!! ;) Take care and have a wonderful weekend! Yvette
Comment from angel123
Your poem is very meaningful and I enjoyed reading it. It rhymes well and you used all the required words. It flows well with insightful meaning and your arwork choice is interesting. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Your poem is very meaningful and I enjoyed reading it. It rhymes well and you used all the required words. It flows well with insightful meaning and your arwork choice is interesting. Best wishes!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Oh my goodness - what a wonderful review and those shiny stars are a perfect cap on a very long day!! Thank you for stopping in today and for such lovely comments - may you have a fantastic evening in your corner of the world!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
You've used your four words beautifully as you went through the verses Yvette.Violence leaves lasting memories in the young and old, as you say, 'minds will ne'er unlearn' Lovely presentation,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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You've used your four words beautifully as you went through the verses Yvette.Violence leaves lasting memories in the young and old, as you say, 'minds will ne'er unlearn' Lovely presentation,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review!
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, What Have You Wrought, has the required words, FIRE COLD ICE BREATH, and reminds us that what we are made to learn in youth, good or bad, is with us for life.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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This poem, What Have You Wrought, has the required words, FIRE COLD ICE BREATH, and reminds us that what we are made to learn in youth, good or bad, is with us for life.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Use These Words Poetry contest. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Use These Words Poetry contest. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much for your review.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Stellar, Mystery Writer!
I appreciate the message and the formatting!
Much raw emotion fills your well-crafted stanzas.
Reads very well aloud, and should be heard by many.
Your words resonated deeply with me!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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Stellar, Mystery Writer!
I appreciate the message and the formatting!
Much raw emotion fills your well-crafted stanzas.
Reads very well aloud, and should be heard by many.
Your words resonated deeply with me!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Beautiful lady!
Comment from lyenochka
So beautifully said! You speak for all of us as we can't believe the outrage of the young souls that can't curb their anger or direct it to productively work to bring about peaceful changes. Creative use of all the required words! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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So beautifully said! You speak for all of us as we can't believe the outrage of the young souls that can't curb their anger or direct it to productively work to bring about peaceful changes. Creative use of all the required words! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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Thank you so very much for your thoughtful review!!
Comment from Tina Crute
Sadly, I have now six to give you, but you deserve a 7 anyhow. I love this for its truth and energy and just the fact that you felt strongly enough to post this. I have no clue how you or your muse created these evocative phrases, but well done. This reader comes away from this poem sad about things that have been destroyed, but mostly that minds have been destroyed and future's altered...all over lies.
Just telling it as I see it:)
Tina
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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Sadly, I have now six to give you, but you deserve a 7 anyhow. I love this for its truth and energy and just the fact that you felt strongly enough to post this. I have no clue how you or your muse created these evocative phrases, but well done. This reader comes away from this poem sad about things that have been destroyed, but mostly that minds have been destroyed and future's altered...all over lies.
Just telling it as I see it:)
Tina
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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Your virtual six is an awesome gift - thank you so very much for your wonderful and thoughtful review!
Comment from karenina
This is so good I've read it three times! You've used the required words not in a superficial way at all, but in a very deep reflection of the affect on our youth of all the world is demonstrating. Love the line: "Remember even ice can burn..." How true! We'd best be thinking of the inheritance of hate and division we are leaving for our children!--Karenina
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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This is so good I've read it three times! You've used the required words not in a superficial way at all, but in a very deep reflection of the affect on our youth of all the world is demonstrating. Love the line: "Remember even ice can burn..." How true! We'd best be thinking of the inheritance of hate and division we are leaving for our children!--Karenina
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful and insightful review, Karenina!
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You really did this contest proud! My vote is yours!--Karenina
Comment from Hopeful2
A strong message that applies to the current violence taking place in our nation's larger communities. The message is sincere and worth contemplating; poetically, the overall piece feels a little stretched at times to make rhyme occur. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and feelings.
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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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A strong message that applies to the current violence taking place in our nation's larger communities. The message is sincere and worth contemplating; poetically, the overall piece feels a little stretched at times to make rhyme occur. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and feelings.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your time.
