Comment from Lucy de Welles

Excellent

Wish I had 6 stars to give for this one. How beautiful. Powerful presentation of rhetorical waiting, packed with emotion and metaphors, blasted into the mind of the reader by lime green on black rockets.
Well done! It speaks for itself. You should be proud. I know your wife and son are.
Lucy

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020

Lucy as you continue to review me feel my pain feel my grief which will always remain.
My parents worst nightmare is a loss of a child couple with a suicide of a wife is unending.
And thank you very much!
Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

This should have been a contest entry. It had rhymes, made sense, and gave us an insight into you.. Very nice job. Thank you for sharing. Stay safe and stay healthy.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020

Thanks Earl yes this was an incredible piece and I just posted one that I think you also enjoy if you have time entitled, "The Old Man"
Ricky