Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

You've touched on two aspects of togetherness in your sweet poem that are romantic indications - sharing things in common and finding pleasure in laughter. Enjoy your oreos!

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020

Great review zanya

reply by LisaMay on 15-Sep-2020

Congrats on your 3rd place.

Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel

Excellent

Very sweet! Literally. I love that early stage of a relationship, which you've described here - the getting-to-know-you stage where you are excited at the least little things you have in common.
Excellent 5-7-5 poem!

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020

Superb review zanya

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

Great visuals here. You made me hungry for Oreo cookies with milk (lol). Nice touch of humor and a stunning artwork to go with the poem. Since the topic of the contest is romance, I guess the romance here it between Oreo and milk (lol). A very creative poem.

I wish you luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020

Thanks for sharing zanya

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Your 5-7-5 form tells a romantic tale. I like the image of two people dunking oreos together. You have created a poem that brings a smile to the reader's face.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020

Great reveiw zanya