Wishing
A fond hope for the future.2 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful and alluring offering for the contest, here -- great use of metaphor to create your 'romantic air' ... :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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A beautiful and alluring offering for the contest, here -- great use of metaphor to create your 'romantic air' ... :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the read and review.
Comment from Sanku
correct syllable count and in three lines the depth of his yearning has been brought out very well.... Wishing to be lured under...I liked this very much.All the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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correct syllable count and in three lines the depth of his yearning has been brought out very well.... Wishing to be lured under...I liked this very much.All the best for the contest.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thanks much for the read and review.
