Being Discriminated
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Comment from IndefinitelySmallx
Fantastic take on discrimination. I love that the characters are hive-dwelling insects! For effect, maybe swap out some adverbs and adjectives for ones including root "buzz" or "sting."
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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Fantastic take on discrimination. I love that the characters are hive-dwelling insects! For effect, maybe swap out some adverbs and adjectives for ones including root "buzz" or "sting."
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Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thanks very much for your review.
