LOVE OF NATURE
Viewing comments for Chapter 201 "Lull Before the Storm"Eclectic
6 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is nothing like paddling in the sea to lift your spirit and being at one with nature Trisha and I do it often, I enjoyed your words here today, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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There is nothing like paddling in the sea to lift your spirit and being at one with nature Trisha and I do it often, I enjoyed your words here today, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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My dad used to paddle wearing a shirt, tie, and jacket! It is calming and no one thought it strange back then (60 years ago)
Thanks for your review, it added pleasant memories to my day.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Love your turquoise water, that reminds me about something that I have not tasted this summer:"Her lull before the storm is there
Calm 'in the moment' thoughts
The storm a human jungle scene
A fast paced competitive whirl
Spent in man designed sunshine
Turquoise vistas will become grey " Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Love your turquoise water, that reminds me about something that I have not tasted this summer:"Her lull before the storm is there
Calm 'in the moment' thoughts
The storm a human jungle scene
A fast paced competitive whirl
Spent in man designed sunshine
Turquoise vistas will become grey " Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thanks for your positive review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from juliaSjames
I like your serene and appealing free verse based on the lovely picture
The between spaces are part of the cycle of life. You capture those feelings with deft strokes of your poetic brush.
Small typo,
"Chrystal" should be "Crystal"
Stay safe
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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I like your serene and appealing free verse based on the lovely picture
The between spaces are part of the cycle of life. You capture those feelings with deft strokes of your poetic brush.
Small typo,
"Chrystal" should be "Crystal"
Stay safe
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thanks for your complimentary review, and for catching my typo.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is very Beautiful writing, turquoise sea standing in the calm ocean, between celestial heavens, to appreciate what god has given life contentment now reappears. I can feel that contentment just by looking at your imagery. It's absolutely breathtaking view. Awesome job. breathtaking view.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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This is very Beautiful writing, turquoise sea standing in the calm ocean, between celestial heavens, to appreciate what god has given life contentment now reappears. I can feel that contentment just by looking at your imagery. It's absolutely breathtaking view. Awesome job. breathtaking view.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your very complimentary review. I?m glad you got benefit from my words
Hugs, Trisha
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Your welcome
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about an excellent interpretation of the picture from the picture this club. The girl standing in the water has much to contemplate about and she can do it peacefully there.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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A very well-written poem about an excellent interpretation of the picture from the picture this club. The girl standing in the water has much to contemplate about and she can do it peacefully there.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Thanks for a great review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Kingsrookviii
I love this. It really speaks of detoxing from the stresses of modern living and attests to the healing power of nature. The language is soft and easy, to fit or rather set the mood, also. Well done in every area. Bruce.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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I love this. It really speaks of detoxing from the stresses of modern living and attests to the healing power of nature. The language is soft and easy, to fit or rather set the mood, also. Well done in every area. Bruce.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for an excellent review, it made my day! I?m glad you enjoyed the read
Hugs, Trisha