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Autumn Memories

Thoughts of family togetherness long ago.

4 total reviews 
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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the sense of smell is the 1st connector with memories. The reader who has ever been around raked or burning leaves will sit in a daze remembering those days. We used to like to rake them so high that we could jump off our porch roof into the pile. Thank you.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
    Wow! That is a lot of leaves. Thanks for the cool image of jumping into a large pile. And thanks for the read and review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Or create more of it, yeah?! ;) :) Such a wonderful contest offering for this extremely limited format! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls this evening! ;)

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
    Thanks for the read and the encouraging words.
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
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Nice photo brings a memory of the family doing things together. In this case the typical autumnal task of raking the fallen leaves and setting fire to them. The smoke rising enhances the memory. Nicely done in 8 words!

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
    Too bad we no longer can burn the leaves, but memories are good.
    Thanks for the read and the review.
reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 12-Sep-2020
    Why can't you burn the leaves? I live in a protected nature area in Mallorca, Spain. It means that we are not supposed (high fines!) between April and the half of October because of fire-danger. But after that, we can burn leaves and other garden waste like pruning twigs, etc. in our gardens freely.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
    Not allowed they say leave burning pollutes the air.
reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 13-Sep-2020
    I don't think leaves pollute. But of course, it is NOT allowed to burn plastics, rubber, paint, etc.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
    According Purdue University: Burning leaves release irritants into the air that can cause respiratory problems and other health issues. ... Piles of burning leaves can also release carbon monoxide into the air, which is dangerous to everyone but especially for newborn infants and the elderly .
reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 13-Sep-2020
    Thanks for telling me. I have a pile of garden rubbish waiting to be burned in October. Maybe I should dispose of it at the town's junk-yard.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
    At least in Arlington Heights, IL it is against the law to burn any waste, leaves included.
reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 13-Sep-2020
    It's not against the law here, but when it is polluting the air, I don't want to burn it anymore.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
    You are a good person.
reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 13-Sep-2020
    Ooooh! I don't know about that. But thank you, anyway.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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That's nice. I love how your poem and image go together so perfectly. The message in your poem is wonderful. It's also nice that you have pleasant memories of raking leaves! I sure don't! Great job!

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
    Too bad, we had great fun raking and throwing leaves at each other. Even Dad got into the action. Thanks for the read and feedback.