Prescription for the Heart
Repeat daily for joyful rhythm...17 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This twelve-word poem, Prescription for the Heart, has the right word count and reminds the readers that every happy brick builds the good building.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
This twelve-word poem, Prescription for the Heart, has the right word count and reminds the readers that every happy brick builds the good building.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thanx for your review on this short one, Bill -- great to hear from you again over here! ;) :) Take care of you and yours! ;) Yvette
Comment from trimple
Hello, Love
Congratulations on the winning entry. A fine 12 word poem that reminds us all that gratitude brings much internal happiness.
kind regards
tracey
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
Hello, Love
Congratulations on the winning entry. A fine 12 word poem that reminds us all that gratitude brings much internal happiness.
kind regards
tracey
Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much, Tracey, for your review on this one, my lady!! ;) Hope this finds you with a smile for the day and happiness to share: goodness knows we need MORE of both! :) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Mia Twysted
We must try to "resolve" out experiences. For if we don't then we hold on to baggage that we do not need in our lives. Once we have come to terms with it we can let it go and feel lighter.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
We must try to "resolve" out experiences. For if we don't then we hold on to baggage that we do not need in our lives. Once we have come to terms with it we can let it go and feel lighter.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thanks much for your review. 8-)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love the philosophy in your words here and I reckon this could be a winner for the contest, I wish you luck, a wise and wonderful 12 word poem, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
I love the philosophy in your words here and I reckon this could be a winner for the contest, I wish you luck, a wise and wonderful 12 word poem, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much for your review.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Eckhart would like this poem. The message in this poem is if we are grateful and don't listen to the grumping chatterer in our mind. When we listen to the chattering we will surely become unhappy and we suffer. Well thought out.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
Eckhart would like this poem. The message in this poem is if we are grateful and don't listen to the grumping chatterer in our mind. When we listen to the chattering we will surely become unhappy and we suffer. Well thought out.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much for your review.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
I enjoyed this entry for the 12 Word Poetry Contest writing prompt. There is truth in your words. I hope this poem does well in the contest!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
I enjoyed this entry for the 12 Word Poetry Contest writing prompt. There is truth in your words. I hope this poem does well in the contest!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thanks much for your review.
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I voted for this entry!
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Thank you -- you rock!! :) ;) ;) ;)
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Y. M. Roger
Your prescription for the Heart is well said.
Very nice thought to be Happy for every day things where one can find happiness.
Gert
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
Hello Y. M. Roger
Your prescription for the Heart is well said.
Very nice thought to be Happy for every day things where one can find happiness.
Gert
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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When that's all there is, at least it is something! Here's sending you a smile along the cyberspace walkway, Gert! ;)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Beautiful entry for the 12 Word Poetry Contest. Good word count. I like the presentation. I love the topic you chose.... Gratefulness is so important.
Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
Hello, anonymous,
Beautiful entry for the 12 Word Poetry Contest. Good word count. I like the presentation. I love the topic you chose.... Gratefulness is so important.
Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much, Gypsy, for your review on this shorty! ;) Have a Magnificent Monday! ;) Yvette
Comment from lyenochka
Great message in your twelve word poem. We can be resolved to be thoughtful and live intentionally with gratitude to more fully live life! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
Great message in your twelve word poem. We can be resolved to be thoughtful and live intentionally with gratitude to more fully live life! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your great review!! 8-)
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Why must I be out of 6's?! You have made superb use of your twelve words in this delightful, uplifting poem. Great use of figurative language--personification of "happiness" and "wings" as metaphor
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
Why must I be out of 6's?! You have made superb use of your twelve words in this delightful, uplifting poem. Great use of figurative language--personification of "happiness" and "wings" as metaphor
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Oh, Janice, I gladly accept your virtual on this one -- it's quite late in the week anyway, right?! Thank you for the wonderful review!